That aint a poem it was written in 3 minutes

Obvious ripples in a dead calm spring pond
still cool
I feel you pour over my entirety
soothing, lightly rubbing...
pulling me
to the restless river, carrying us
to where the water whitens
banging hard against the rocks...
the torent enveloping us...
hot moving in and out
between the shores...
exhausting our bodies
seperating us from the wisdom
on which we rely to feed judgement

Then silence, just two intertwined
bodies... wet, tired lying on the shore
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Posted: Nov 2009
About this poem:
Its bad cause thats not the way I live anymore therefore I didnt write
what I know I wrote what I remember and worse yet could still do if
inspired seduced made full of life......not a chance

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Neostylites
Thanks Poetry Man for sharing your rapture. I enjoyed it.
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poetryman4u
Thank you Neostylites, I will watch for your work and Im sure
It will be uplifting.
Redex
3 mins or no I enjoyed the read, it created an energyteddybear
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