this ship sails in one direction never looks back only memories they drift by saying how i feel cast in this world an ocean of memories always dreaming of something better missing what you never had sailing of into illusion looks begin to fade to feel the change i am only saying how we all feel born to sail of in this life from youth matures like a good wine drinking of it you will be no more we all still go in this direction give me a number if you can manage a mystery like the pyrmids of egypt old was its destiny the ship that sails in one direction our age all our memories no one can stop this boat sailing destained,final destanation our life until this ship can sail no more like an eagle my soul flies to the heavens to be joined with angels
I really enjoyed this poem. As I thought of my life and direction as a ship sailing I felt kind of lonely then I would go off course to gather my memories as I head to the final port. What a great story loved how you told it
happygolucky4u we all sail in the direction of love beautiful comment i really enjoyed it sail of into the sunset everyones dream
JyonnahReading, Pennsylvania USAApr 30, 2013
This write is so poignant & insightful, Liam! I wanted to post a Beach Boys song called "Sail On, Sailor" and found a video from last year. This one is more ironic as they're much older now, in their 70's! As you wrote, we're sailing on till we sail no more! Blessings to you, dearest friend!
i am only saying how we all feel born to sail of in this life from youth matures like a good wine drinking of it you will be no more we all still go in this direction You are a poet that writes from the soul Liam, love it.
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Rob
born to sail of in this life
from youth matures like a good wine
drinking of it you will be no more
we all still go in this direction
You are a poet that writes from the soul Liam, love it.
It is part of human psyche I believe, to be always dreaming of something better, some Shangri La where all is peace, health and harmony.
A fine write, Liam.
Bill