don’t leave your baggage at the door…

Hi… Come on in…is that heavy. Let me help you with that…it appears you’ve collected quite a few things over the years…don’t be shy…open it up and let’s see what we find. Ah, a pair of worn shoes…just needs resoling…not a problem, I know the best shoe doctor in town. What else you got there....a couple of shirts....let’s hang them in the closet, plenty of extra hangers see right here next to mine….a toothbrush and toothpaste…hey, that’s the same brand I use…up there on the shelf…what’s next. Some dirty socks and pants…I’m just starting a load in the wash…they’ll be clean in a flash. Make yourself at home…no rush …we can unpack the rest later. For you are welcome here… my only request to you is..... don’t leave your baggage at the door…
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Posted: Nov 2009

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poetengineer
generous and sweet words , u can easily help friends in need and this is the sweet of u,thanks for ur beauty mind
jazzy75
poetengineer - thanks for your ever kind comments my poet friendhug bouquet
Neostylites
Ah Jazzy! It's greatest! Says anything that's latent within us. An evergreen!
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trurorob
clever poem my friend
rob
gypsyheart
Brilliant my friend Jazzy-i love the message inside and the way you wrote ithug bouquet gift
Redex
Lovely sentiments jazzy, and readteddybear
jazzy75
Neo - pleased you liked it and the color :-)bouquet
jazzy75
Rob, thanks my friend :-) Just trying to experiment with a different techniquecheers
walkerman
jazzy:

..the train leaves any time now..destination here..thanks for the sharing...gift gift

wm wave
Shell225
thats an amazing poem, I love the concept behind it... just wonderful
jazzy75
GH -- my pleasure :-) Glad you enjoyedhug bouquet teddybear
jazzy75
Redex - happy you enjoyed hug your poetry and comments are always upliftingyay
Zazuna
Can't anybody make it a song?
agoodguy2have
very open and loving
jazzy75
Zazuna - I'm not musically savvy...I'll leave that to someone else :) Thanks for the thoughts...and I hope all is going well with youhug
sabeel
dear poet jazzy...
as before ,you hit again..
the deference between you and other poets is that, you are writing poems in simple words and every one can understand easly, like me...we are beginners...

thanks for the best share...and your inspiration on my poems..
sabeel.teddybear teddybear teddybear
jazzy75
walkerman - this poem became relevant again today my friend....it's been a while and wanted you to know that the destination is getting closer and closer...to here. thanks and i miss you my friend


hug
jazzy75
Shell - thank you for you kind comments....i'm glad the poem touched you hug teddybear gift bouquet
niah9
Great poem jazzy...missed it first time around.....like the message...niahteddybear cool
hedistuff
aw jazzy...how lovely. makes me wanna crawl up into your lap and forget the world...
boyshchrm6
Beautiful Jazzy. Suggests and openness that is just so refreshing these days. You can deal with stuff you know but difficult to deal with a black box. My hats off to your poem,wisdom and clarity.
angel comfort hug hug hug peace teddybear
jazzy75
thanks agoodguy2have - to remain open and vulnerable is not easily accomplished....as time and experience pass....but it's the only way to truth.teddybear
jazzy75
sabeel - thank you for your kind words....i hope to see you back at the corner soonwave teddybear hug
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