a sparrow

by cameal6someplace, Washington, USA

Apr 2013 541 Views 13 comments

a sparrow

Sing your song of wonder,sing it loud and clear. Make your nest for its that time of year. Your mighty courage for one so small,the sky lit battles,yet you do not fall. You live with out riches,or falshey garb,christian icon you are.

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Posted: Apr 2013

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just watching all the sparrows as they chase off the crows.

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Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKApr 14, 2013

You live with out riches

Lovely poem Cameal, I love watching the birds... They always seem so happy... We humans could take a leaf out of their book... They know the way to happiness.

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandApr 14, 2013

birds heavenly creatures they always sing for us and all they ask for is crumbs nice vision

cameal6OPsomeplace, Washington USAApr 14, 2013

thank you odette,I truly do love watching the birds. I think I like the comical quail the best.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

I loved this. And the tiny cute little birds. They stopped by my house a few weeks back on their way back up north. I looked out my kitchen window and I thought what is going on in my back yard. I kept seeing something hopping

they had blanketed my back yard and were playing. Some birds just come here for the winter months. Most the sparrows return home tho a few will hang out till the heat of summer drives them away.

cameal6OPsomeplace, Washington USAApr 14, 2013

thank you darkhorse for your coment

cameal6OPsomeplace, Washington USAApr 14, 2013

yes happy they blankit my trees and chicken coop...it seems like they know and rember the feeding times of the geese and chickens. They have gotten where they have no fear of me and when I put the feed down its like a seen from the movie the birds lol

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

Wonderful short piece, does it make me strange that the classic movie the birds comes to ming

Thank you for sharing...Jesse

cameal6OPsomeplace, Washington USAApr 14, 2013

lol thankyou james... Its the way they perch on the chicken wire bu the hundreds waiting for the food to be put down then they all fly down to eat my poor birds have to fight for there dinner. and yes I have watched the geese grab a bird and dround it in the water buckit.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

I have seen geese do some horrible things, feathers of the devil they are

, no really beautiful creatures,they just need a hug I think

cameal6OPsomeplace, Washington USAApr 14, 2013

lol yes they can be horrable.. mine are very protective of there areia this time of year. last year they tore the neabors cat apart, and that secret stays with me ..but I felt horable because I would listen to them calling the cat that would never come.

fjamesj9701DunkinDonuts, Florida USAApr 14, 2013

That kinda makes you the gooses advocate with even a darker secret,

mr sniffles here kitty kitty....

cameal6OPsomeplace, Washington USAApr 14, 2013

lol noooo I just felt it better to leave them wondering what happend to the cat then have them hate me and my geese. They really like the geese and enjoy there eggs.

smmerwindSan Francisco, California USAApr 16, 2013

How did I miss this my friend. A very nice one

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