Pieces put together

Every minute of every day,
makes me miss you undeniably more,
this is what i have to say,
sometimes i find myself on the floor.

i want to help you trust again,
i want for you to be mine,
my feelings i can barely contain,
could this be a sign.

the day i first met you,
my eyes i could not tear,
what was i to do,
nothing i could bare.

when im with you,
time stands still,
precious moments,
forever to brew,
this is my will,
this is my testament...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Apr 2013
About this poem:
at the time of writing this poem i was feeling happy and inlove, i have this guy in my life whith whom i really like. seem to be falling inlove with him... he has trust issues, not sure if its worth it or if i should move on....

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fjamesj9701
Nive write and if its worth it than work with him. He obviously has attacments that fog his judgements, but then again one shouldnt walk in someone elses past if you want to move forward. Good write again...jesse
Oh an kinda.hard to see with the colors
ladyjewel
teddybear very nice, keep going but yes change the color:-)thumbs up
rapturecapture
Hi Tarakp

Amazing poem

I would agree with the color change.. Just to highlight the beauty in your words.
It is a very passionate write...and I really loved your heartfelt words.
Beautiful read..thank you for sharinghug wave
Tarakp23
Thank you all for the lovely comments. And I will change the colour as soon as I can....will be updating more poetry as soon as I can.
check_mate
Good one tarakp23 thumbs up
shadow1950
hi Tara welcome to our corner a fine poem to start with it flows well as to if you should wait or not only you can decide gl with your choice fine writeteddybear bouquet hug wine
doctorwho10
nice writecheers
darkhorse555
a cloud hangs overhead beautiful piece dazzlingthumbs up tip hat
Tarakp23
Thank u all for the comments means a lot to me... cheering
morgen90210
keep it rolling girl
welcome to poets corner
you gonna get many more fans
just leave it to god and just move on

let him catch up if he wants
then you know how much
you mean to him
and maybe find love
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