Cool Waters

deep is the water of the lagoon
filled with many kinds of things
the more you look the more you see
reflected clouds floating in the water

a host of wondrous plants on the banks
little fish darting hither and tither
tall reeds are casting mottled shadows
deep down a big catfish lies in ambush

the cool waters a pure bliss to watch
rippling waves setting off flashes
different colours glint and shatter
like light beams hitting coloured shards

the tranquillity of this magical place
calls out to me beckoning me closer
I lay on the grassy bank trailing a hand
in the soft water and feel I am restored

keep this place secret just for us to share
come here whenever the outside world is too much
here a blissful peace awaits to bathe you
to bring comfort and soothe away the daily pains

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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
tranquillity of water

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Poetnumber1
Now this is a place worth going,tranquility and purity intertwined.bouquet angel
lucy1777
wonderfully written!applause
Fellsman
Cool waters: A cool write - there is something so calming and tranquil about watery lagoons and water falls which beats any medicine a doctor could prescribe.

Your blissful secret retreat sounds heavenly - and your waterfall pic is just divine...

Best wishes

Bill gift teddybear
shadow1950
so perfect that to let too many people know would ruin it the only thing is I too don't know where it is blues moping ty for reading dear M.M teddybear bouquet hug purple heart kiss wine angel
ClubSpirit
Thanks for sharing.
I read it...then closed my eyes
It Reminded me that probably we all "met" places like this in our lives. They are Precious and yet sometimes forgotten...but they are always there.
shadow1950
hi Lucy ty for reading much appreciated teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
ty Bill it is nice to slip away to somewhere private and unspoilt
ty for readingteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
Odette67
keep this place secret just for us to share
come here whenever the outside world is too much
here a blissful peace awaits to bathe you
to bring comfort and soothe away the daily pains


O, I love this so much Shadow, my kinda place. purple heart hug
darkhorse555
lovely memories nice piece and beautiful picture i enjoyed the parkthumbs up cheers wine
shadow1950
hi clubspirit sounds good to me closing eyes and letting imagination carry you away ty for readingteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi Chrissie its my kinda place too I love tranquillity and a feeling of being isolated from every day life ty for readingteddybear sad flower bouquet hug kiss
shadow1950
ho Liam ty dear glad you enjoyed it just imagine swimming there ty for readingteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
beautifulyou
Cool, pure, bliss, colours, light, tranquility, soft, restored, peace, comfort, soothing... so many gifts we are given by water

So lovely, the write and photo. Ty Shadow rose
shadow1950
hi beautifulyou water the life giver without it all would die ty for reading teddybear bouquet gift hug kiss wine
ladyjewelonline now!
Water carms like nothing else can:-)
Take a bath, you can just loose yourself in the water and dreamhug
Lovely angel as always bouquet
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