salvation

my eyes drooling,spakling moist light up
smiling of joy and happiness within
you set my world on fire
like the indians of old
my burning embers of you love
smoke drifting to the heavens
my spirit speaks to you
in the clouds in my life
you offer me hope
in my ashes i will rise
bowing my head in finding salvation
smouldering remains of a love
as the wind blows
lifting me to the heavens
far away you my heaven
heavens open theatre
surrounded by forks of lightning
in an open stage
the burning aroma of you
casting its spell all over my heart
love i never seen such beauty
flashing lightning radiates your hair
my souls heaven for my heart
my spirit speaks to my soul
then to you my sweetheart
my love to you loyalty
in you a lovers dream
you love a true vision
held in my heart
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: May 2013

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shadow1950
hi Liam salvation I feel you have found in this write its lovely
well penned
you offer me hope
in my ashes i will rise

like a phoenix teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
Poetnumber1
You bring that special feeling of love in each line Liam.Beautiful words budcheers
Odette67
my spirit speaks to my soul
then to you my sweetheart

Such beautiful words of love Liam.purple heart
fjamesj9701
Man you have outdone your self my friend , need to change your name to Dark Pegasus laugh Soaring poetry brother, now where is that duck I have a few words to say... so stay tunedvery mad
madtat29
Yeah! You brought the heat...hot coals my friend...handshake
paloma66
Rise once more like the phoenix and soar in a paradise of love.All the best to you DH.peace heart wings bouquet
darkhorse555
the phoenix the legend of love great comment outstandingly beautifulthumbs up tip hat
benidorm
Superb write,your words make me hope to rise above the
world and its troubles.
darkhorse555
poetno1 a message of something beautiful living in your mind grat comment thank you very muchthumbs up tip hat
Arteee
WOW!! this one took my breath away!... Extremely beautiful!!
So So So Talented!! Amazing way with words very inspiring!
Thank you for sharing darkhorse555...
angel thumbs up wine teddybear
darkhorse555
odette you fill me with so much happiness your comments thank you so muchthumbs up thumbs up tip hat
rapturecapture
Hi Darkhorse

wow thumbs up You just get better and better in the land of thought...

Very fertile mind you have indeedconversing laugh

Beautiful poem thank you for sharinghug kiss angel wave
darkhorse555
jesse such a soaring comment your a star thank you so much my heartfelt appreciation thank you ever so muchangel thumbs up grin
darkhorse555
madtat such aradiant comment lovely thank you so muchthumbs up wine
diana_1
beautiful and awesome, stirring the senses
darkhorse555
paloma a beautiful bird will arise white graceful like royalty a swan they mate for life the wonder of beautythumbs uptiphat:
darkhorse555
Benidorm lovely comment thank you ever so much greatly appreciatedthumbs up wine
darkhorse555
artee such a wonderful comment blows me away lovely comment thank you ever so muchthumbs up tip hat
darkhorse555
rapture you comments I am swooning beautiful thank youthumbs up tip hat
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