my eyes drooling,spakling moist light up smiling of joy and happiness within you set my world on fire like the indians of old my burning embers of you love smoke drifting to the heavens my spirit speaks to you in the clouds in my life you offer me hope in my ashes i will rise bowing my head in finding salvation smouldering remains of a love as the wind blows lifting me to the heavens far away you my heaven heavens open theatre surrounded by forks of lightning in an open stage the burning aroma of you casting its spell all over my heart love i never seen such beauty flashing lightning radiates your hair my souls heaven for my heart my spirit speaks to my soul then to you my sweetheart my love to you loyalty in you a lovers dream you love a true vision held in my heart
Man you have outdone your self my friend , need to change your name to Dark Pegasus Soaring poetry brother, now where is that duck I have a few words to say... so stay tuned
poetno1 a message of something beautiful living in your mind grat comment thank you very much
ArteeeChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandMay 16, 2013
WOW!! this one took my breath away!... Extremely beautiful!! So So So Talented!! Amazing way with words very inspiring! Thank you for sharing darkhorse555...
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well penned
you offer me hope
in my ashes i will rise
like a phoenix
then to you my sweetheart
Such beautiful words of love Liam.
world and its troubles.
So So So Talented!! Amazing way with words very inspiring!
Thank you for sharing darkhorse555...
You just get better and better in the land of thought...
Very fertile mind you have indeed
Beautiful poem thank you for sharing