A man capable of moving the mountains and breathing life into the gods stands empty before the world His heart filled with passion and romance that never ends As he slowly withers away under the stars praying for another He waits as a young soul feeling like an old soul waiting for an angel to breathe life into him
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
I saw the poem feature and read some poems and thought i have never wrote a poem - Im not sure this is a poem or any good but at least i can say i tried ;)
Hi, GrantM, With his young soul feeling like an old soul, the poet has captured well the longing for an angel to breathe life into him. Welcome to Poet's Corner.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMay 11, 2013
He waits as a young soul feeling like an old soul waiting for an angel to breathe life into him
Poetry comes from the soul, I think you did a great job.
Write some more buddy , there are no rules that say what it is or isnt unless your writing something specific like a haiku and even then its from with in . Good stuff and welcome to the corner.Jesse
beautifulyouNew York, USAMay 11, 2013
Beautiful expressions Grant Welcome, and ty for sharing what flowed from your being
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 11, 2013
Hi GrantM
It was lovely to read, such beautiful soulful thoughts. Thank you for sharing
wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKMay 11, 2013
Enjoyed this poem well done my friend welcome to the club
GrantMOPmelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 28, 2013
Thanks guys
JyonnahReading, Pennsylvania USAMay 28, 2013
Hello Grant Welcome to Poet's Corner! Wow, first poem ever? This is a great write and as the other poets said, I would like to see more from you.
Comments (14)
A poem is our soul talking what we have and feel inside us.
An angel has breathed life... into You Already
Blessings
With his young soul feeling like an old soul, the poet has captured well the longing for an angel to breathe life into him. Welcome to Poet's Corner.
Poetry comes from the soul, I think you did a great job.
Welcome, and ty for sharing what flowed from your being
It was lovely to read, such beautiful soulful thoughts.
Thank you for sharing