Standing Vulnerable

A man capable of moving the mountains and breathing life into the gods stands empty before the world
His heart filled with passion and romance that never ends
As he slowly withers away under the stars praying for another
He waits as a young soul feeling like an old soul waiting for an angel to breathe life into him
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
I saw the poem feature and read some poems and thought i have never wrote a poem - Im not sure this is a poem or any good but at least i can say i tried ;)

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BBMis4me
Of course this is a poem, and... is a so beautiful.
A poem is our soul talking what we have and feel inside us.

An angel has breathed life... into You Alreadyangel

Blessings

purple heart hug
GrantM
Thanks cool
steve1223
Hopefully this is the first of many more poems that we will see from you

cheers
shadow1950
I concur with Steve welcome to poets corner a good penteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
GrantM
Thanks guys! I have always felt i had a power with words and your approval makes me happy handshake
gnj4u
Hi, GrantM,
With his young soul feeling like an old soul, the poet has captured well the longing for an angel to breathe life into him. Welcome to Poet's Corner.
Odette67
He waits as a young soul feeling like an old soul waiting for an angel to breathe life into him

Poetry comes from the soul, I think you did a great job. purple heart
fjamesj9701
Write some more buddy , there are no rules that say what it is or isnt unless your writing something specific like a haiku and even then its from with in . Good stuff and welcome to the corner.Jessehandshake
beautifulyou
Beautiful expressions Grant
Welcome, and ty for sharing what flowed from your being teddybear
rapturecapture
Hi GrantM


It was lovely to read, such beautiful soulful thoughts.
Thank you for sharinghug angel wave
wayne34
Enjoyed this poem well done my friend welcome to the clubhandshake
GrantM
Thanks guys thumbs up
Jyonnah
Hello Grant cswelcome Welcome to Poet's Corner! handshake Wow, first poem ever? thumbs up This is a great write and as the other poets said, I would like to see more from you. purple heart wine applause thumbs up
cherryreggae
Hi grant very soulfully, beautiful poem....thanks.4 sharingangel applause angel
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