Lost Days

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

May 2013 515 Views 19 comments

Lost Days

Author: Spartacus2012

It has been days
since I have been
to the very bottom...

Into a well of nothingness
where there is no water
just dry sand and pain...

One fine day
she will look for me
she will not find me...

She will look
north and south
i won't be there..

I will be
where the sun in born
and where the moon hides...

She will look
where the four roads meet
searching for my footprints...

But it will rain
and the strong winds
will sweep them away...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: May 2013

About this poem:

Forsaken and betrayed...

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Comments (19)

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMay 11, 2013

were the son is born heavens light is shining nice write

FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 11, 2013

You take desolation and defiantly give it a good kick up the butt... A fine write!

Regards

Bill

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 11, 2013

hi Ken a good write dear amigo you lead well through this poem ty for sharing

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 11, 2013

hi Ken a good write dear amigo you lead well through this poem ty for sharing

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMay 11, 2013

Thank you Liam for your kindest wishes....Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMay 11, 2013

Thank you Fellsman for taking time to read....Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMay 11, 2013

Thank you Linda for your thoughtful commentary and good to read from you..Ken

madtat29Farmington, New Mexico USAMay 11, 2013

Forgive and forget if you can bro...good write I feel it...hang in there

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMay 11, 2013

Thank you Madtat, it is difficult when you really loved someone..But I guess we have to move on...Thanks again...Ken

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 11, 2013

Hi Ken

As down and deflated as you must feel right now...
You have a strength about your words(That's Good)

You have been down that road...and once bitten twice shy...

You have a strong heart! and can close "that" chapter and move on...

Her Loss Ken is your Lain...in the meaning of love...

Keep strong and think of the wonderful people around you (family)

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 11, 2013

P.S. typo... Gain

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMay 11, 2013

Thank you for understanding Martina...I have experienced so much emotional pain in the last few days...I still wonder did something happen to her or did I unwillingly meet a sociopath? I do hope someday I will know one way or the other..Ken...

beautifulyouNew York, USAMay 11, 2013

'I will be
where the sun in born
and where the moon hides...'

I'm glad for that ((((Ken;)))
for such a place sounds like a gorgeous space for refuge, healing and rebirth. Much love and warmth to you.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMay 11, 2013

Thank you Beautiful you...I pray I can meet a young lady who will help me rise like a phoenix and love again...Ken

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAMay 11, 2013

I like the ending part of this poem

(I will be
where the sun in born
and where the moon hides...

She will look
where the four roads meet
searching for my footprints...

But it will rain
and the strong winds
will sweep them away...)

what a cool way to put it

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMay 11, 2013

Thank you kindly Happy...A sort of painful closure...Thank you...Ken

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMay 12, 2013

Mueva en mi amigo, desecho puesto su vida a causa de uno que no fue valor su amor.
Muchos esqueletos sobre la costa de la vida, que sabe que puede encontrar una perla.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMay 12, 2013

Gracias mi Linda paloma y dios ses con ustedes..Ken..