Do you know.. how l feel

Have you ever wonder how I feel
what torment my will
Yes I know I'm a man
and I have to understand
your smile turned me on
your silence turned me off
I do not ask forgiveness for what I've done
although now I'm just alone
I guess, happiness, as a simple emotion
do not live it as an illusion
I know that happiness is contrary to reason
I do not ask forgiveness for what I've done
I carry with me the weight of bad decisions
of immaturity season
in which tomorrow
is made of simple dreams
You have filled my heart, my mind, my will
but you never asked for
how l feel
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Posted: May 2013
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Relationship sometimes becomes an empty space ..you can fill it with simply words

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darkhorse555
nice piece i enjoyedthumbs up wine
Jokerman73
Infinite thanks man, I have written your name on my best friends book
Jyonnah
Wow, this is excellent and so true! I know this horrid feeling of an empty relationship. I'd rather be single than in this type of situation. Totally well penned, Jokerman!! thumbs up wine angel
beautifulyou
Sometimes the most meaningful things to
us elude the people closest to us, for
whatever the reasons

This is a moving write Jokerman rose
sundayrose1
You have filled my heart, my mind, my will
but you never asked for
how l feel


I have been there my dear fellow poet. You are already brushing all the truth in my face with this write. You see when you are as good as it looks, the saying that says: WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU GET? is a very straight forward take on life. Sometimes we assume our lover's feelings as to the degree of what and how they feel because of our own reflections in life. How wrong it is sometimes. I learned my lesson. But thank you for such a clear revelations on this grain of truth in life.

SRbouquet bouquet
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