Have you ever wonder how I feel what torment my will Yes I know I'm a man and I have to understand your smile turned me on your silence turned me off I do not ask forgiveness for what I've done although now I'm just alone I guess, happiness, as a simple emotion do not live it as an illusion I know that happiness is contrary to reason I do not ask forgiveness for what I've done I carry with me the weight of bad decisions of immaturity season in which tomorrow is made of simple dreams You have filled my heart, my mind, my will but you never asked for how l feel
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Posted: May 2013
About this poem:
Relationship sometimes becomes an empty space ..you can fill it with simply words
Infinite thanks man, I have written your name on my best friends book
JyonnahReading, Pennsylvania USAMay 20, 2013
Wow, this is excellent and so true! I know this horrid feeling of an empty relationship. I'd rather be single than in this type of situation. Totally well penned, Jokerman!!
beautifulyouNew York, USAMay 20, 2013
Sometimes the most meaningful things to us elude the people closest to us, for whatever the reasons
This is a moving write Jokerman
sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 25, 2013
You have filled my heart, my mind, my will but you never asked for how l feel
I have been there my dear fellow poet. You are already brushing all the truth in my face with this write. You see when you are as good as it looks, the saying that says: WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU GET? is a very straight forward take on life. Sometimes we assume our lover's feelings as to the degree of what and how they feel because of our own reflections in life. How wrong it is sometimes. I learned my lesson. But thank you for such a clear revelations on this grain of truth in life.
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us elude the people closest to us, for
whatever the reasons
This is a moving write Jokerman
but you never asked for
how l feel
I have been there my dear fellow poet. You are already brushing all the truth in my face with this write. You see when you are as good as it looks, the saying that says: WHAT YOU SEE IS WHAT YOU GET? is a very straight forward take on life. Sometimes we assume our lover's feelings as to the degree of what and how they feel because of our own reflections in life. How wrong it is sometimes. I learned my lesson. But thank you for such a clear revelations on this grain of truth in life.
SR