There is a night made ??for drink and your life is surfing in a glass waiting for the dawn light destiny follows you by the way it leaves you for a while but you know it will hit you again. you do not know whether to cry or try to laugh laugh in tears you do not say anything, but you have a thousand things to say. you wonder if this is the only life talking in a strange language that ppl consider wrong a cigarette and a cup of coffee are the only friends who understand when you're really bad. Imagine that tomorrow you will meet the great love what can you do, it was all planned imagine that the world will forget you just for a while then you drink something..so you will not die now imagine that happiness is an enchanted train that you take when you are wrong.
sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 25, 2013
now imagine that happiness is an enchanted train that you take when you are wrong.
Jokerman,
This is one of the best write I have read in all my life. You pictured a very conscience driven time of our lives if only to learn about where we are based on our experience, where we are now and where we are going. Crossroads of our lives to amke a decision and yet it seems we are so entrenched in a position where the only thing left for us to do is to drown our failures with more skepticism.
Anyways, I feel like I have seen a movie in your story Jokerman and I do admire the way you laid it all out.
Very eyeopener and intriguin write full of so much grains in the truth and fallacies of life.
Good luck and thank you so much for the read. You actually remind me so much of a life that I have seen and lived myself. You write so great.
SR
Jokerman73OPMilano, Lombardy ItalyNov 26, 2013
Aloha.... my kind friend, I believe that our souls are fragments of a single universal soul, sometimes these fragments come together. a big hug and a sweet smile to you
Fragments of the universal soul do happily come together, dear poet, and this coming together is called love and happiness. This is quite a definition of happiness and love, which I admire. "When all your desires are distilled; You will cast just two votes: To love more, And be happy." Rumi Thank you, dear poet, for sharing you thoughts with us! Kindest regards and wishes of love!
enigma2Melbourne, Victoria AustraliaFeb 15, 2014
I feel you..' your life is surfing in a glass waiting for the dawn light destiny follows you by the way it leaves you for a while but you know it will hit you again. you do not know whether to cry or try to laugh laugh in tears you do not say anything, but you have a thousand things to say'
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is an enchanted train
that you take when you are wrong.
Jokerman,
This is one of the best write I have read in all my life. You pictured a very conscience driven time of our lives if only to learn about where we are based on our experience, where we are now and where we are going. Crossroads of our lives to amke a decision and yet it seems we are so entrenched in a position where the only thing left for us to do is to drown our failures with more skepticism.
Anyways, I feel like I have seen a movie in your story Jokerman and I do admire the way you laid it all out.
Very eyeopener and intriguin write full of so much grains in the truth and fallacies of life.
Good luck and thank you so much for the read. You actually remind me so much of a life that I have seen and lived myself. You write so great.
SR
a big hug and a sweet smile to you
"When all your desires are distilled;
You will cast just two votes:
To love more,
And be happy."
Rumi
Thank you, dear poet, for sharing you thoughts with us! Kindest regards and wishes of love!
waiting for the dawn light
destiny follows you by the way
it leaves you for a while
but you know it will hit you again.
you do not know whether to cry or try to laugh
laugh in tears
you do not say anything, but you have a thousand things to say'