In the depths of unlived happiness

There is a night made ??for drink
and your life is surfing in a glass
waiting for the dawn light
destiny follows you by the way
it leaves you for a while
but you know it will hit you again.
you do not know whether to cry or try to laugh
laugh in tears
you do not say anything, but you have a thousand things to say.
you wonder if this is the only life
talking in a strange language that ppl consider wrong
a cigarette and a cup of coffee
are the only friends who understand when you're really bad.
Imagine that tomorrow you will meet the great love
what can you do, it was all planned
imagine that the world will forget you just for a while
then you drink something..so you will not die
now imagine that happiness
is an enchanted train
that you take when you are wrong.
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Posted: Nov 2013
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sundayrose1
now imagine that happiness
is an enchanted train
that you take when you are wrong.


Jokerman,

This is one of the best write I have read in all my life. You pictured a very conscience driven time of our lives if only to learn about where we are based on our experience, where we are now and where we are going. Crossroads of our lives to amke a decision and yet it seems we are so entrenched in a position where the only thing left for us to do is to drown our failures with more skepticism.

Anyways, I feel like I have seen a movie in your story Jokerman and I do admire the way you laid it all out.

Very eyeopener and intriguin write full of so much grains in the truth and fallacies of life.

Good luck and thank you so much for the read. You actually remind me so much of a life that I have seen and lived myself. You write so great.

SRbouquet bouquet bouquet
Jokerman73
Aloha.... my kind friend, I believe that our souls are fragments of a single universal soul, sometimes these fragments come together.
a big hug and a sweet smile to youteddybear teddybear
marikia
Fragments of the universal soul do happily come together, dear poet, and this coming together is called love and happiness. This is quite a definition of happiness and love, which I admire.
"When all your desires are distilled;
You will cast just two votes:
To love more,
And be happy."
Rumi
Thank you, dear poet, for sharing you thoughts with us! Kindest regards and wishes of love!hug
enigma2
I feel you..' your life is surfing in a glass
waiting for the dawn light
destiny follows you by the way
it leaves you for a while
but you know it will hit you again.
you do not know whether to cry or try to laugh
laugh in tears
you do not say anything, but you have a thousand things to say' bouquet sad flower
madtat29
Totally dig this one guy...surfs up..I'm catching the next wavedrink pouring
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