jellytot rainbow

to love you lots like jellytots
I am just a lonely heart
dreaming in the clouds
in the mist of angel tears I lie
memories of battles in hell
in the fork of the crossroads
dreams of forever love
in a confused arena my mind
all battled scared and worn down
a cross upon my shoulders
laden heavy with all its hurt
I have fallen to the ground
only to come
upon the crossroads again
standing tall searching
the window of light
in a far of distance
light at the end of the tunnel
if not on this planet
my soul leaves my body
my host of scars
with wings joins my spirit
in some faraway skies blue
flying to heaven
let there be love
stars of all colours
strewn across a night sky
a mystical paradise
lost loves dream
only to be found in heaven
in a jelly tot rainbow
my pot of love
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Posted: May 2013

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shadow1950
too busy laughing. Liam I love it only you could come up with this fine penteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
Poetnumber1
Creative poem Liam....''to love you lots like jellytots'' thats new but I like the road you took my mind down.It takes special skills to do what you do.Have a great day my friend.cheers
weemick1960
Allright Liam, i'm crying now, where's my share of the tots?
Happygolucky4u
hmmm That sounds pretty a jelly tot rainbow. But I really feel like you need a hug hug May you find your heaven here on earth wine
cameal6
jelly tot? is that any thing like a pop tart?...You really need to find someone to mend this broken heart of yours... I hope that the angles hold you and ill send a prayer for you to find happyness. angel teddybear
cameal6
ok just looked up jellytots...glorafied gumdrops...5 flavors the colors of a rainbow.
Arteee
Very emotional sad and beautiful write darkhorse555 I really felt this...
Another amazing poem they just keep pouring out of your heart..
Thank you for sharing darkhorse555
angel thumbs up wine angel2
Fellsman
Hi Liam

Although I have been to Belfast quite a few times, I have only been to what I call 'proper' Ireland once - spending a week in Meath, I wish I had spent more time in the Emerald Isle, as so many of you Irish poets seem to have been touched by the Muse, (or whatever the Gaelic is for 'Muse.')

This poignant narrative so adroitly describes the minefield which is the mind when it comes to affairs of the heart, and what originality to describe that minefield as a jellytot rainbow.

A fine write buddy - if I may say so, definitely one of your best.

Kindest regards

Bill cheers
ladyjewelonline today!
Liam this is so sadcrying , i like how you make it fun with the rainbow or i would be sad all dayhug hug

Ps shhhhh i ate all Micks share last nightgrin

Huge hugs, teddybear
darkhorse555
mike that was an excellent comment zapping a few jellytots your waygrin thumbs up wow wine
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