to love you lots like jellytots I am just a lonely heart dreaming in the clouds in the mist of angel tears I lie memories of battles in hell in the fork of the crossroads dreams of forever love in a confused arena my mind all battled scared and worn down a cross upon my shoulders laden heavy with all its hurt I have fallen to the ground only to come upon the crossroads again standing tall searching the window of light in a far of distance light at the end of the tunnel if not on this planet my soul leaves my body my host of scars with wings joins my spirit in some faraway skies blue flying to heaven let there be love stars of all colours strewn across a night sky a mystical paradise lost loves dream only to be found in heaven in a jelly tot rainbow my pot of love
shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKMay 25, 2013
too busy laughing. Liam I love it only you could come up with this fine pen
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMay 25, 2013
Creative poem Liam....''to love you lots like jellytots'' thats new but I like the road you took my mind down.It takes special skills to do what you do.Have a great day my friend.
That sounds pretty a jelly tot rainbow. But I really feel like you need a hug May you find your heaven here on earth
cameal6someplace, Washington USAMay 26, 2013
jelly tot? is that any thing like a pop tart?...You really need to find someone to mend this broken heart of yours... I hope that the angles hold you and ill send a prayer for you to find happyness.
cameal6someplace, Washington USAMay 26, 2013
ok just looked up jellytots...glorafied gumdrops...5 flavors the colors of a rainbow.
ArteeeChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandMay 26, 2013
Very emotional sad and beautiful write darkhorse555 I really felt this... Another amazing poem they just keep pouring out of your heart.. Thank you for sharing darkhorse555
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKMay 26, 2013
Hi Liam
Although I have been to Belfast quite a few times, I have only been to what I call 'proper' Ireland once - spending a week in Meath, I wish I had spent more time in the Emerald Isle, as so many of you Irish poets seem to have been touched by the Muse, (or whatever the Gaelic is for 'Muse.')
This poignant narrative so adroitly describes the minefield which is the mind when it comes to affairs of the heart, and what originality to describe that minefield as a jellytot rainbow.
A fine write buddy - if I may say so, definitely one of your best.
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Another amazing poem they just keep pouring out of your heart..
Thank you for sharing darkhorse555
Although I have been to Belfast quite a few times, I have only been to what I call 'proper' Ireland once - spending a week in Meath, I wish I had spent more time in the Emerald Isle, as so many of you Irish poets seem to have been touched by the Muse, (or whatever the Gaelic is for 'Muse.')
This poignant narrative so adroitly describes the minefield which is the mind when it comes to affairs of the heart, and what originality to describe that minefield as a jellytot rainbow.
A fine write buddy - if I may say so, definitely one of your best.
Kindest regards
Bill
Ps shhhhh i ate all Micks share last night
Huge hugs,