waters edge challange of water falls

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Jun 2013 333 Views 6 comments

waters edge (challange of water falls)

Author: Unknown

When rivers where young its course mapped out,growing like a child digging its way out. Plumiting over cliffs edge,roaring as your lifes blood forms a mist,spweing new life into cliffs edge. Pools formed through the tears ,brings new homes to fish for years. You are savage yet gental, you are a mighty force demanding respect.

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Posted: Jun 2013

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Comments (6)

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJun 5, 2013

Such powerful images you stir with this poem Cameal.A fine write indeed,i really like it.

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAJun 5, 2013

thank you poet#1 waterfalls are powerfull life giving and beautyfull,yet if they are not taken with care can kill

ladyjewel

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJun 5, 2013

I agree you captured water so well, and yes its beautiful and peaceful,
But it needs to be respected

shadow1950

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJun 5, 2013

lovely Cameal portraying water extremely well, a fine write

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAJun 5, 2013

thank you ladyJ for your sweet comment,one rarely looks at the water in its true aspect,most just see the beauty and the nessesties it provides.

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAJun 5, 2013

thankyou shadow for you nice complment. thank you for always reading my so calld poems.

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