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Aug 2013 358 Views 12 comments

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My days where long and dreary,Everything was painted blue. Not a sound was even cheery and discouragement within me grew. With you by my side I cannot fail. My love had lied until the moon showed pale. My heart was pierced by cupids bow,Which quickly sweetend each beat and now I love you so.

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Posted: Aug 2013

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Comments (12)

Poetnumber1

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 2, 2013

I love the rhythm in your beautiful words here Kidmenot.Thanks for singing a sweet melody in my heart this morning.Excellent.

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandAug 2, 2013

beautiful words falling in cupids bow lovely piece

morgen90210

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 2, 2013

tis is music to my ear

weemick1960

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 2, 2013

Hi Cameal,
really enjoyed this. It sings, I Love poetry that sings. Give me melodic flow every day of the week. Love, the beating heart of life itself.
Catch you later,
Your friend,
MIKE.

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAAug 2, 2013

thank you Poet#1 for your sweet words,Im gald you found joy in it my friend.

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAAug 2, 2013

thank you Liam Im glad you enjoyed it...wow guess I can write when the mood stricks lol

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAAug 2, 2013

ty morgen for you comment

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAAug 2, 2013

thankyou mike,once in a great while I manage to make a poem worth its effort. Im glad you enjoyed it.

ladyjewel

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaAug 2, 2013

flows beautifully sweet lady

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USAAug 4, 2013

this is soooo pure and sweet

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAAug 5, 2013

thankyou ladyj for your coment

kidmenot

kidmenotOPusa, Washington USAAug 5, 2013

thank you beaytyfulyou for your coment

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