smouldering fire

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Jul 2013 468 Views 12 comments

smouldering fire

The wind strokes my face
Ablaze in dreams passion
Love my tender light
Flickering shadows of beauty
In the ashes the embers speaking

The dark side of our makeup
Broken wings of love's despair
Smoldering embers
Love's light shines
My emotion this fire burns

Burning desire
In the shadows speak
Deep within my soul
My spirit soars in it's heaven
To relight my fire

Ablaze a towering inferno
Love a true desire
Dreaming in it's warmth
Embers of beauty
Who relights my

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Posted: Jul 2013

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Comments (12)

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKJul 1, 2013

Hi Liam,
Nice to see you post again bud. Where is the smouldering fire, I was reading a forest fire but you know i'm an idiot. Good read partner, as usual.
Catch you later.
MIKE.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJul 1, 2013

mick I am in the jungle hacking down a few trees to make myself a tree house ha ha mick I am looking for frogs funny coloured ones ha ha who cooked the goose see you in a while

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKJul 1, 2013

utterly charming write Liam you excel

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJul 1, 2013

linda thank you I am humbled thank you ever so much for the beautiful comment greatly appreciated

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAJul 1, 2013

Passionate write Liam..I liked this one...Ken

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 1, 2013

So all this time the frog has been away, he's been chopping down trees

Back to point,excelling stuff my friend.A warm welcome back champ.

ArteeeChristchurch, Canterbury New ZealandJul 1, 2013

WOW! your back and your on fire! lol.. A beautiful warm passionate write you truly are a wonderful poet darkhorse555.. Thank you for sharing.. Warm Regards.. Vickie