moon

eye of the moon
looking down
into darkness
staring, watching
quarter draped dark

dancing clouds
upon the face
a wink,
silent breeze
whisper softly

talking night
haunting in sounds echo,
shadows crawl over
no light found
creeping darkness

empty no face
colourless beauty
light create shadows,
covers light the dark

into dark her glow,
power to light
our existence
in the night
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jul 2013

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weemick1960
Hi Liam,
Another enjoyable read partner. The moon, how strange the moon, can be something wonderful and wondrous, it could be cold and deadly, it always depends on what story you tell. The moon tells a story of Love in my eyes. A little light into our dark.
Another nice one.
Keep them coming my friend.
Catch you on the flipside Liam,
Your friend,
MIKE.
Spartacus2012
Full moon is calling....Nice write my friend...Kenpopcorn
Serenity4two
I liked this alot thumbs up

"colourless beauty " of the moon --really lovely thumbs up

Well done ! Regards --Fiona wine
Happygolucky4u
Loved it the poetic walk thru the lunar cycle of the moon. That was a mouthful. Want say it twice laugh Good job!bouquet
rapturecapture
Hi Darkhorse

Really enjoyed reading your beautiful poem,thank you for sharing


Martina xxxhug angel wave
morgen90210
moon,lunar is always a beautiful write
coz i too love the moon as self
thanks Liam
darkhorse555
well mick the moon has a strange effect on me i see the hairs growing on my hands ha ha clapping wonderful comment deeply appreciatedgrin
darkhorse555
well mick the moon has a strange effect on me i see the hairs growing on my hands ha ha clapping wonderful comment deeply appreciatedgrin
darkhorse555
KEN THANK YOU FOR THE LOVELY COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATEDthumbs up grin
darkhorse555
FIONA THANK YOU FOR THE VERY BEAUTIFUL COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATEDthumbs up grin
adjhe
Darkhorse I do like your writing a lot you seem to did deep for each one as if leaving part of you here when you are done. Thank you for being real. Keeping true to ones self. God blessteddybear banana applause addy
darkhorse555
happygolucky thank you for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel thumbs up
tinyfangs
Beautiful lines, and I have an obsession with moonlight, same as with dark nights bereft of it, so definitely thank you for sharing this ^_^
darkhorse555
martina thank you for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel
diana_1
hi, Most w
onderful read, thanks... I will be watching for her tonight...cheering
mimzy333
this poem shows more then just the moon, it also showes how one can love others without boasting. great poem liam.
wayne34
Strange effects the full moon as howwwwwwrolling on the floor laughing cheers dh nice write my friend
Ravensgold
This is a Fine piece DH,..Nice use of words..Enjoyed it!handshake
darkhorse555
morgen thank you for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friendangel
Redex
missed this one first time around and loved it. In my minds eye I have found the picture to your poem.
It is a fact that the moon does not only guide the tides in a mental hospital my mother worked in for years she said the full moon brought out so much unrest in her charges.teddybear
ChristinDew
Love the moon and it is true gave lots of inspiration. Nice poem my friend!!
darkhorse555
addy thank you ever so much for the amazing comment deeply appreciated god blessangel
darkhorse555
tiny fangs thank you for the wonderful comment appreciated deeplyangel
darkhorse555
diana thank you for the very beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel
darkhorse555
mimzy thank you for the very beautiful comment sincerely appreciated dear friendangel
darkhorse555
howling beautiful comment wayne thank you kindly dear friend deeply appreciatedangel tip hat
darkhorse555
anthony dear friend thank you kindly for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel tip hat
darkhorse555
so true redex dear friend shifting tides thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel tip hat
darkhorse555
christian dew thank you for the beautiful comment appreciatedangel tip hat
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