Don't try to impress me I know you all to well the market trader look when planning a deal I just know you are trying weighing the odds to pull a fast one over some poor sucker
The sheepish look when you have cheated flowers and chocolates by the score tiredness the excuse as you roll away so don't try to impress me my dear
Yet you being a great father and friend goes a long way towards forgiving you the loving way you help others in need all of this is what impresses me the most
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 29, 2013
I've seen quite a few tricks of embezzlement that goes unnoticed by the unconcerned.Enjoyed this one my friend.Nicely portrayed and goodluck in the contest.
ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaJul 29, 2013
this is so worthy of entering in any contest, well done sweet Linda
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJul 29, 2013
Dearest M.M ty dear friend for kind remarks
kle76amnew york, New York USAJul 29, 2013
I think we all can compare someone to this peom......and more often than not they are so forgivable it hurts....Really enjoyed this one Shadow
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoJul 30, 2013
Congrats on your big placement.Proud of you Linda.
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJul 30, 2013
nail on the head with that remark Kle ty for reading
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJul 30, 2013
dearest M.M ty so much have you read the winning poem? its awesome
shadow1950OPtaunton, Somerset, England UKJul 31, 2013
hi Joy and whoa there I sense this struck rather close to home ty for stopping in
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