Impress Me

Impress me

Don't try to impress me I know you all to well
the market trader look when planning a deal
I just know you are trying weighing the odds
to pull a fast one over some poor sucker

The sheepish look when you have cheated
flowers and chocolates by the score
tiredness the excuse as you roll away
so don't try to impress me my dear

Yet you being a great father and friend
goes a long way towards forgiving you
the loving way you help others in need
all of this is what impresses me the most


07/28/2013 written for Impress me contest
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Posted: Jul 2013

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Comments (8)

Poetnumber1
I've seen quite a few tricks of embezzlement that goes unnoticed by the unconcerned.Enjoyed this one my friend.Nicely portrayed and goodluck in the contest.
ladyjewel
applause this is so worthy of entering in any contest, well done sweet Lindabouquet hug
shadow1950
Dearest M.M ty dear friend for kind remarks
teddybear bouquet hug wine purple heart angel kiss
kle76am
I think we all can compare someone to this peom......and more often than not they are so forgivable it hurts....Really enjoyed this one Shadowwow
Poetnumber1
Congrats on your big placement.Proud of you Linda.
shadow1950
nail on the head with that remark Kle ty for reading teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
dearest M.M ty so much have you read the winning poem? its awesome
teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi Joy and whoa there I sense this struck rather close to home ty for stopping in teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
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