a thousand saints would fall myrtre in a heavenly hue you are the fairest by far the prettiest in purest of colours mirror, mirror amazingly georgous purity indepth vision white rose
most beautiful satin soft petals falling from the heart outwards crowning heavenly beauty
sweetest aroma drifting on air upon scent prettiest of all flowers in thorns you played the part
deep inside invites from colour the softest kiss upon light of day
mirror ,mirror caressed so sweetly in the rising sun by the morning dew beautiful within
Hi Liam, Another excellent write my friend. Went into interflora yesterday, tried to get some roses, they said they were sold out. Finaly figured out who had them all, when she said the gent had asked for a black rose. You beat me to them again. Enjoyed the read. Catch you later Liam. Your friend, MIKE. Catch you on the flip side bud.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 4, 2013
Liam spill the beans, bud you in love? its oozing from this poem man!
mick i thank you for the outstanding comment heartfelt appreciated my old friend
ChristinDewToronto, Ontario CanadaSep 3, 2013
Love this one
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 4, 2013
Hi Liam, your poem mirrors beauty all the way through. I like the flow of this piece, its just the way a good romantic poem should sound. Well penned, well expressed! Thanks for your uplifting review on my poem. Take care my friend.
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Another excellent write my friend.
Went into interflora yesterday, tried to get some roses, they said they were sold out. Finaly figured out who had them all, when she said the gent had asked for a black rose. You beat me to them again. Enjoyed the read.
Catch you later Liam.
Your friend,
MIKE.
Catch you on the flip side bud.
bud you in love?
its oozing from this poem man!