Look back on love.
Pray! who said winter's bloom
flowered bright too short a day,
how thy faint sun burns bright to groom,
love's grace in short hours grey,
Alas for thee, no May freshly green,
nor star showered coloured rainbow known,
nor sweet airs on soft summer serene,
where blushing scents of youth's roses blown,
Yet from thy untarnished winters sun,
shall e'er a glorious moment reign,
through heaven's snowy candlelight, run
the warmth of love's joy, to sustain
the heart and leaves the world not cold,
whilst we with tear, thru' life our love unfold.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2013
About this poem:
Separated from my first love by Military service of some two and a half years, which sealed our fate, by the winds of chance, met again after a period of 50yrs, I penned these lines, emotion still there, alas! Cupid's hands were tied, clearly not meant to be.
Comments (19)
Yet from thy untarnished winters sun, shall e'er a glorious moment reign... It is nice that a chance encounter can bring back such strong feelings. Although it doesn't always yield the desired outcome, it is comforting to know that feelings can be as strong as blushing scents of youth's roses. Thanks for sharing.
this is just beautiful !
"through heaven's snowy candlelight,
run the warmth of love's joy " --stunning poetry !
Well done again --warm regards --Fiona
Thank you all for your generous comments, I stumbled across this piece, used as a book-mark, long relegated to the dusty book shelf, brought back sparkling facets of a time long ago, thank you all again, Phil.
it must have been nice to at least get that answer:-)
beautiful feelings of being young and so in love
This sonnet is quite beautiful. I love the poetic language, the poignancy and the warmth - as for the unwished for final denouement - what can one say other than C'est la vie...
A delightful write.
Best wishes
Bill
Autumnal days, Phil.
Love always Phil.