Look back on love.

Pray! who said winter's bloom
flowered bright too short a day,
how thy faint sun burns bright to groom,
love's grace in short hours grey,
Alas for thee, no May freshly green,
nor star showered coloured rainbow known,
nor sweet airs on soft summer serene,
where blushing scents of youth's roses blown,
Yet from thy untarnished winters sun,
shall e'er a glorious moment reign,
through heaven's snowy candlelight, run
the warmth of love's joy, to sustain
the heart and leaves the world not cold,
whilst we with tear, thru' life our love unfold.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2013
About this poem:
Separated from my first love by Military service of some two and a half years, which sealed our fate, by the winds of chance, met again after a period of 50yrs, I penned these lines, emotion still there, alas! Cupid's hands were tied, clearly not meant to be.

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darkhorse555
looking back no thanks ha ha the warmth of love is beautiful lovely pieceangel
gnj4u
Hi, requiny2006,
Yet from thy untarnished winters sun, shall e'er a glorious moment reign... It is nice that a chance encounter can bring back such strong feelings. Although it doesn't always yield the desired outcome, it is comforting to know that feelings can be as strong as blushing scents of youth's roses. Thanks for sharing.
Serenity4two
Wow Reguiny !
this is just beautiful !
"through heaven's snowy candlelight,
run the warmth of love's joy " --stunning poetry !
Well done again --warm regards --Fiona wine
reguiny2006
Darkhorse, qnj4u,and Fiona,
Thank you all for your generous comments, I stumbled across this piece, used as a book-mark, long relegated to the dusty book shelf, brought back sparkling facets of a time long ago, thank you all again, Phil.
ladyjewel
hug we all have one we look back on with a "what if.."
it must have been nice to at least get that answer:-)
beautiful feelings of being young and so in loveteddybear
Fellsman
Hi Phil

This sonnet is quite beautiful. I love the poetic language, the poignancy and the warmth - as for the unwished for final denouement - what can one say other than C'est la vie...

A delightful write.

Best wishes

Bill wine
reguiny2006
Bill, Ladyjewel, Thank you both for your positive comments, as a footnote, we exchange Christmas cards, so youth still lingers sweet. Phil.
Happygolucky4u
I loved this poem. And is it not nice to have beautiful memories. Sometimes it is not that something is not meant to be. It is it has already been. That moment in time was yours. teddybear
Poetnumber1
Beautifully penned Phil,this was a true delight to read this evening.Memories like that leaves a lasting impression.
shadow1950
hi Phil you take us on a walk with you lovely teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
reguiny2006
Happygolucky, Thank you, and yes you are absolutely correct, the moment in time was mine and sweeter for th experience, Phil
reguiny2006
M.M. Thank you, yes it is the green of our spring that colours our
Autumnal days, Phil.
reguiny2006
Lady from Tauton, Thanks, and the walk took place in Somerset. Phil.
marikia
To think what blow fate may deal us and us able to overcome the pain thanks to "the warmth of love's joy," still lingering, poignant, meant to sustain the heart through life's journey. Bitter-sweet awesome write! Thank you, dear poet!hug
reguiny2006
Marikia, I'm rather late in thanking you for your lovely comment, have been away for some time, Phil.doh
candykid
I can honestly say that this style of writing is immaculate. ......I have never had a life that has ever exposed me to to this kind of wording and I just love it........thumbs up cheers
reguiny2006
Candykydd, Thank you, you're so gracious with your comments, Phil.cheers
lindsyjonesonline today!
Phil a very endearing tribute to our experience with love. Yes indeed love is love is love. Though tears will always be a part of our loving love is indeed our journey that sustains all our happiness and unforgettable memories.

Love always Phil.
reguiny2006
Hello Phylss, Thanks, and I concur your comments, Phil.teddybear
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