listen

Shut up and listen
for a change
Do not judge me
When I am quiet
no one ever planned
anything with noise

Heaven in you
Broke every rule
even the golden one,
bringing out the dark secret
Like a cuckoo

Poisoned the nest
Getting into the garden,
In temptation cries
Runs deep into the blood

Veins pumping fury
Of a thousand steamboats,
blood cuts both ways
No illusions
the method behind the madness

Hidden eating
The sordid secret
Watch what you are doing,
falling down
lies like
Toy soldiers
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2013

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Poetnumber1
This was a deep write Liam enwrapped with striking images.A moving piece my friend.Will send you a mail.
weemick1960
Hi Liam,
I agree with M, this is deep. You amaze me with your writes Liam, in their diversity I mean. I'm sitting here trying to figure out what you haven't done. This was good partner.
Catch you later.
Your friend,
MIKE.
Catch you on the flip side.
kidmenot
wow now this is total poetry anger....I hate liers too.
darkhorse555
poetno1 thank you for the amazing beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated thanks pal angel grin
darkhorse555
THANK YOU DEEPLY MICK FOR THE BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATLY APPRECIATED thumbs up angel
darkhorse555
THANK YOU DEEPLY POETRY ANGER SOMETHING OF MY CHEST I WANTED TO SAY BUT NEVER UTTERED BEAUTIFUL COMMENT GREATEFULLY APPRECIATEDangel angel thumbs up
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