I clearly recall Vigus who was around eight Wearing a girl's dress climbing over their front gate His folks thought this apparel would keep him at home And discourage him from leaving their place to roam
When we played a game of marbles on the bare ground He would tuck the dress between his legs and stoop down This was in preparation for his turn to “pitch” So he could aim at the target without a hitch
His first language was a version of French patois Which he learned in his native island, St. Lucia When we first met and he spoke French patois to me I, not understanding, would nod approvingly
We made chocolate ice cream from sifted dirt and sand And sought someone to taste our own special brand He was my next door neighbour and as a young boy Playing together as children brought us great joy
socrates44OPSan Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoMay 20, 2017
Bentlee
Thanks for your comment.
This piece is about my friend who made the chocolate ice cream, together with myself, and which I mentioned in my comment to your challenge.
I still hesitate to post the main piece about the actual voluntary tasting of the ice cream, not because of fear, but, as I said earlier, some may find it offensive, especially those who may look down on mischievous activity in childhood. I view the entire scenario in the tradition of the adventures of Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry Finn.
socrates44OPSan Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoMay 20, 2017
Kathy
I am fine. Thanks for your comment.
I believe the term “cross dresser” is a modern terminology with certain connotations that may seem abnormal to some.
However, I think Vigus's folks were simply using this action as a means to try to keep him at home while they were out. I must say that I admired the way he would tuck the dress between his legs and stoop down when it was his turn to “pitch”.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKMay 21, 2017
funny you should mention huck finn and co I just found an old book on lovely paper of one of their stories, It invoked such memories reading as a child so when the say us oldies go back to childish things I just had to buy it and will indeed read it sucking on an ice-cream cone
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What a wonderful heart
Good man
God Bless
Soph
Kathy
Thanks for your comment.
This piece is about my friend who made the chocolate ice cream, together with myself, and which I mentioned in my comment to your challenge.
I still hesitate to post the main piece about the actual voluntary tasting of the ice cream, not because of fear, but, as I said earlier, some may find it offensive, especially those who may look down on mischievous activity in childhood.
I view the entire scenario in the tradition of the adventures of Tom Sawyer and Huckleberry Finn.
I'm glad you appreciate the piece.
Thanks for your kind words.
my poet friend,
I am happy that you enjoyed it.
Have a nice day.
I am fine. Thanks for your comment.
I believe the term “cross dresser” is a modern terminology with certain connotations that may seem abnormal to some.
However, I think Vigus's folks were simply using this action as a means to try to keep him at home while they were out.
I must say that I admired the way he would tuck the dress between his legs and stoop down when it was his turn to “pitch”.