soul to soul

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Aug 2013 483 Views 10 comments

soul to soul

Feeling the soul
Nothing seems real
Touching softest colours
Your lips speaking

Into the ears
they whisper softly,
my fantasy with words
Falling upon the heart
A wonderful feeling

The lips kiss my soul
Surrounded in beautiful light
Polaroid with colours
A rainbow halo

Radiating from
the deepest chambers
Like a dance fluttering
In the breeze

Sailing in your direction
Every breath blows
My soul closer,
floating my boat
Anchoring at the bay
In your heart

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Posted: Aug 2013

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Comments (10)

ChristinDewToronto, Ontario CanadaAug 5, 2013

And my heart is flattering
when I heard your boat coming,
feel the heartbeat welcoming
the soul it has been missing.

Nice poem

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandAug 5, 2013

the steam is flying I am paddling like mad beautiful heartfelt comment thank you kindly deeply appreciated

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandAug 5, 2013

Goodness , this is good

very romantic poetry !
"polaroid with colours
A rainbow halo " --beautiful words that stand out for me in particular!
Well done --best wishes ---Fiona

shadow1950taunton, Somerset, England UKAug 5, 2013

another one nailed expertly Liam well done

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandAug 5, 2013

Hi D.H.

This is so beautiful,wonderful thoughts in Soul to Soul.

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

kidmenotusa, Washington USAAug 6, 2013

ok now that is a soulful heart melting poem, like a massage in a bottle.

online today!

niah9Auckland, New ZealandAug 6, 2013

Some use words to bring colour and feeling, but with the wrong words, never touch sincerity. Now darkhorse, that is what you achieve, especially here. Words on an artists canvas, show us the picture....but also carry the emotion...Kathy

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 6, 2013

Captivating piece.Well done on this one Liam.

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAAug 6, 2013

What a wonderful description of soul to soul

mcradloffPlatteville, Wisconsin USAAug 6, 2013

I like the last line. It does seem like we are in an ocean sometimes and the ones we love are our bays of protection that we get to spend time with out of the deep ocean currents of life.