Made from love and I was born A mistake that came from heaven Hugs I needed and the love I craved Were very rarely given The acceptance that he gave Was not really real Then I would start to misbehave To get attention that I craved My soul cried out to be loved By a man in love with his beer The soul can never forget this pain And so you must forgive me dear My frustrations were forged back then I thought deep to find the answer
One night I was a troubled teen It seems today like an awful dream I thought no one cared or listened The droplets of beer on his beard glistened He was awful to my mother He was hurting my little brother Mean to me as always, far too much aggression A white teddy bear a rainbow around his neck; I clung to it for comfort that night, his name was Ragamuffian
I took all the pills that I could find And lay down on their bed hoping to die Soon I became filled with fear, Where would my soul go from here? When he came into the room, so late I murmured: “please don’t let me die” He dragged me to the bathroom then Tried forcing salt water down my throat My hair was pulled I was thrown to the ground He drunk drove me to the hospital He ripped my teddies head off Pulled me up the stairs…
I awoke in a hospital bed… It was my birthday the next day! And I was full of tears…
I’m so sorry to disappoint you; I know this won’t make sense Could hardly explain it all…But I hate teddies to this day, I was craving the love of a beer drinking man I could never bear to be shut out this way… The gate: your evidence!
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Posted: Aug 2013
About this poem:
In explanation to my ex boyfriend for smashing down his gate one night...He asked me "what were you thinking?"
diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoAug 12, 2013
real, raw, it made me feel, made me remember but tears cleanse and make way for something else... I feel this, I like this... in midst of this pain you have shown beauty
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoAug 12, 2013
Your poem is very touching and heartrending. I empathise with you in your agony and suffering. You are not a mistake. Life has a purpose for you. Be Strong! You will overcome!
TangerinoOPBenoni, Gauteng South AfricaAug 13, 2013
Thanks Diana,for your comment here. It's good to get it out and move forward more positively
TangerinoOPBenoni, Gauteng South AfricaAug 13, 2013
So kind of you, thanks Bill
rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandAug 13, 2013
Hi Tangerino
I can relate to your thoughts in this painful write.. A very emotional read,and I feel you captured the feeling of fear and loss in the most innocent of ways.. from a child's heart.
Thank you for sharing..
Lots of warm love sent your way
TangerinoOPBenoni, Gauteng South AfricaAug 13, 2013
Rapturecapture, thank you for reading. It has taken many years for me to tell this story, your kind words thoughts are much appreciated
Hi, Tangerino, I could never bear to be shut out this way… The gate: your evidence! First, the external ones tumble in one's frantic attempt to find the internal ones that are locked waiting to be opened. As the poet writes I was not thinking..., the flow of thoughts and feelings fills the page and its awareness yields a key. Thanks for sharing this heart-wrenching write. Welcome to Poet's Corner.
A very sad.. meaningful and hopefully for you a healing poem.. Thanks for sharing this very sad part of your life, in such an artistic way.
TangerinoOPBenoni, Gauteng South AfricaAug 13, 2013
gnj, I thank you from the bottom of my heart for your kind words and insight into this poem, the key mmmm! truly, you make much sense
TangerinoOPBenoni, Gauteng South AfricaAug 13, 2013
Quietstorm, thank you for your comment here... healing is what is needed for me to move on
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeAug 14, 2013
Ancient Bullman says(that's me ) To share is half the healing done! the other half is to find your feet and move on, Stick around and ill give you a taste of my medicine
Comments (11)
but tears cleanse and make way for something else... I feel this, I like this... in midst of this pain you have shown beauty
I empathise with you in your agony and suffering.
You are not a mistake. Life has a purpose for you.
Be Strong! You will overcome!
I can relate to your thoughts in this painful write..
A very emotional read,and I feel you captured the feeling of fear and loss in the most innocent of ways.. from a child's heart.
Thank you for sharing..
Lots of warm love sent your way
I could never bear to be shut out this way… The gate: your evidence! First, the external ones tumble in one's frantic attempt to find the internal ones that are locked waiting to be opened. As the poet writes I was not thinking..., the flow of thoughts and feelings fills the page and its awareness yields a key. Thanks for sharing this heart-wrenching write. Welcome to Poet's Corner.
To share is half the healing done!
the other half is to find your feet and move on,
Stick around and ill give you a taste of my medicine