only if

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Aug 2013 594 Views 22 comments

only if

beautiful lady
holding you
ever so gently
in the softness
of beauty

as the violin plays
touching souls
under a full moon
i dance
with you

silver shadows
dancing a waltz
with loves melody
singing out
in your earthly
beauty

my spirit rises
applauds
with beating wings
the heart
pounds
on the drums

reaching high
hands out
in a flash
of light

i hand you
the moon
flashing stars
wink delight
in loves
tune

as the sun
kisses the moon
a dancing groom
eclipse
my night

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Aug 2013

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Comments (22)

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaAug 25, 2013

just stunning Liam

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USAAug 25, 2013

Hi Liam,

Wonderfully done romantic write my friend..

Regards,

Ken..

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandAug 25, 2013

This is beautiful Liam
and dancing to a waltz- how wonderful !

Congrats on this beautiful piece of romantic writing -keep up the good work --Fiona

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 25, 2013

Hi Liam,
Is it not the most wonderful thing to dance with your Love in the moonlight. Another good write my friend, really enjoyed this. Keeping the romance alive Liam, good on you partner. Enjoyed the read.
Catch you later,
Your friend,
MIKE.
Flip side my friend.

beautifulyouNew York, USAAug 25, 2013

Another lovely darkhorse,
just lovely in flow and sentiment,

and how true, the violin that plays touches soul!

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandSep 16, 2013

ladyjewel thank you deeply for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 16, 2013

Sweetly romantic Liam.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandOct 11, 2013

thank you ken dear friend deeply appreciated beautiful comment

MariekyleVaughan, Ontario CanadaOct 12, 2013

Sweet and lovely....
I'm reading all your poems and am amazed, but only now that I post a comment. Blessings to you!

RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 12, 2013

Darkhorse that was a beautiful read you are the poet

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 10, 2013

fiona thank you so much for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandDec 21, 2013

mike thank you so much for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandDec 21, 2013

beautifulyou thank you for the amazing comment really beautiful deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandDec 21, 2013

chrissie thank you for the beautiful comment appreciated deeply

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaDec 22, 2013

Very nice poem Liam I like this one

h3y26springfield,MO, Missouri USADec 22, 2013

wow my first time on the poem site. This is so awesome and I hope u continue to write more and share them with the world because you write very well. thank you for sharing.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandDec 22, 2013

marakyle thank you so kindly for the very beautiful comment appreciated deeply

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandFeb 9, 2014

redex dear friend thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated