vampire

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Sep 2013 600 Views 15 comments

vampire

In darkness prey,
hunts a vampire
Empty within
look into the eyes
without soul
Sucking life's feelings,

drained beautiful thoughts
Savoring frozen emotions,
falling on top
Biting deep
into flesh

Draining hurt tastes
To savor
each drop
Lusting eyes,
without soul
pleasure hurts

Love tastes beautiful
Sipping slowly,
without emotion
Until the last drop
Smiling taste ache

Broken heart
Died love
On the last drop,
cold without life
In you

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Sep 2013

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Comments (15)

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 25, 2013

I like the concept in this piece Liam. Lovely and expressive work of art.

cherryreggaebayside, New York USASep 25, 2013

Goth can be so seductive lol...very fine write Liam,,,I like the line
Love taste beautiful

great write really enjoyed

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USASep 25, 2013

Hey Liam,
To die and be reborn is not easy buddy...Lovey write..

Ken

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USASep 26, 2013

Loved this reminds me of the emotional vampire. they person who feeds off your emotions to boost their egos and then moves on

RedexNorthumberland, England UKSep 26, 2013

A very good chilling read.

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKSep 26, 2013

Draining hurt tastes mmm a nice bloody mary nice write my friend very creative read

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandOct 18, 2013

thank you deeply mm beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 26, 2013

cherryreggae thank you dear friend for the amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciated

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 26, 2013

Broken heart
Died love
On the last drop,
cold without life
In you

Liam my friend, this is so like a movie? Great write as usual..

Thanks for the read..

SR

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJan 17, 2014

ken dearest friend wonderful comment thank you deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJan 17, 2014

happygolucky thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandJan 17, 2014

redex dear friend thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated

TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAJan 17, 2014

Liam...have to admit, was not fully on your train until the last verse,
"Broken heart
Died love
On the last drop,
cold without life
In you"
...then I exchanged my coach ticket for 1st Class!