socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoOct 20, 2013
Hi Shadow
Thank you for this ringside seat, watching and listening to your birds in action. I really enjoyed viewing each one of them. Your Haiku is top class! Great Job! Have a nice day!
Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandOct 20, 2013
Wonderful writing as always Linda a joy to read this - F
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Your are a master of the haiku.
HERON GUARDS HIS PREY
HIDDEN UNDER WATER BLUE
PEBBLES SING A SONG ?????
hopefully
your work is very good
HERON GUARDS HIS PREY
HIDDEN UNDER WATER BLUE
PEBBLES SING A SONG ?????
myself I would alter it a little
HERON GUARDS HIS PREY
HIDDEN UNDER BLUE WATERS
LIES A FAT BROWN TROUT
you are definitely on the right tract keep writing
Thank you for this ringside seat, watching and listening to your birds in action. I really enjoyed viewing each one of them.
Your Haiku is top class! Great Job!
Have a nice day!
a joy to read this - F