Collection of Birds (haiku)

Happy pelican
eating an enormous fish
see his pouch bulging

Merry kingfisher
waiting on his pole for fish
he darts and spears one

Full of joy and fun
the skylark warbles in glee
delight in each note

Fearsome eagle drops
plummeting down like a stone
striking hard he kills
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Posted: Oct 2013

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darkhorse555
very beautifully penned dear friendangel
shadow1950
ty Liam have a lovely weekendteddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
Redex
Loved them banana all.
Your are a master of the haiku.

HERON GUARDS HIS PREY
HIDDEN UNDER WATER BLUE
PEBBLES SING A SONG ?????

peace yay hopefullyteddybear
Ravensgold
I enjoyed this Shadow..Great Imagery!Nice workhandshake wave
Poetnumber1
Lovely work Linda.teddybear
shadow1950
hi Redex and Ty much appreciated

your work is very good

HERON GUARDS HIS PREY
HIDDEN UNDER WATER BLUE
PEBBLES SING A SONG ?????

myself I would alter it a little

HERON GUARDS HIS PREY
HIDDEN UNDER BLUE WATERS
LIES A FAT BROWN TROUT

you are definitely on the right tract keep writing
teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
hi Ravensgold and ty for nice review teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
shadow1950
dearest M.M always appreciate your feedback and help you are a true star
teddybear bouquet hug kiss wine
socrates44online today!
Hi Shadow

Thank you for this ringside seat, watching and listening to your birds in action. I really enjoyed viewing each one of them.
Your Haiku is top class! Great Job!
Have a nice day!
Serenity4two
Wonderful writing as always Linda
a joy to read this - F hug
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