choice

by sabeelcochin,kerala., Kerala, India

Jun 2009 786 Views 14 comments

choice

like everyone i have a choice
to write or not.
i know if i choose , not to write
i cannot become a part of good people here
who loves , cares, and advice , only for the best!
never wants to hurt.
i can choose to live like a ordinary man
but i wish to be a different.
i am here ,like you to be the best,

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Posted: Jun 2009

About this poem:

sometimes i need help...

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sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaSep 16, 2009

THANKS ALL FOR THE KIND HELP AND COMMENTS TO ENCOURAGE ME TO WRITE WELL, i know it is not easy to get commetns from best poets like you,
thanks all.
sabeel.

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 16, 2009

Although, we don't comment on all, (If we did, it would have no meaning), we read most, time allowing........if you have difficulty with any words or meanings in English, (I know it can be a difficult language, even I have problems sometimes!), mail me, I will do my best to help.........Andrew....

jazzy75Houston, Texas USASep 16, 2009

I love your sincerity...keep writing from your heart and it will always come out right :-)

fareawayhyderabad, Telangana IndiaSep 17, 2009

never underestimate yourself, you write from your inner strength that GOD gave you..

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaSep 17, 2009

dear poet andrew.
thanks a lot my dear poet, i honour your help,
i need your help to do the best....
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaSep 17, 2009

dear poet jazzy,
i will keep that words in my heart..
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaSep 17, 2009

dear poet fareaway,
thanks for the comment,
i like your poems.
and the methode you used ..
sabeel.

fareawayhyderabad, Telangana IndiaSep 18, 2009

i think your poems speak of things as if they are happening a visual treat. and what you write is so down to earth yet so special.

gypsyheartSouth coast of KwaZulu Natal, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaSep 18, 2009

Always just write-if its comes from within-its NEVER wrong sabeel.I like your poems

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKSep 18, 2009

there is only ever one reason to write my friend, and, that is because you like it, being true to yourself is what counts, being good is only an opinion, and is unimportant, truly.....andrew...

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaSep 19, 2009

dear poet fareaway,
i like your comments with true words..
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaSep 19, 2009

dear sister, artist, gypsy heart,
thank you very much for the encouragements..
sabeel.

sabeelOPcochin,kerala., Kerala IndiaSep 19, 2009

dear teacher, poet andrew,
i am so happy to hear your words..
sabeel.