sweet dreams 40 word challenge

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Nov 2013 854 Views 40 comments

sweet dreams [40 word challenge

close those eyes
feel this breath
sweet blowing kisses
ever so softly
in tenderness
into your sleep
a moonlight shadow
gently caresses
softly upon
your cheek

peach lips kiss
sweet melting honey
into those dusky dreams
held only in paradise

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Posted: Nov 2013

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Comments (40)

Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaNov 14, 2013

Hi DH,

A very sensuous write. What lover could resist? Succinctly done within the word limit.

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoNov 14, 2013

wow.....

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 14, 2013

Romance at it's best , summed up so beautifully in just 40 words !
Amazing Liam ! -well done -F

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USANov 14, 2013

Hi, darkhorse555,
sweet dreams, indeed! Thanks for sharing this sweet melting honey write.

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USANov 14, 2013

D.H. A little ambrosia to go with your wine?

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainNov 14, 2013

Good write Liam, flows nicely.
Rob

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 14, 2013

Hi Liam

Beautiful feelings of a perfect paradise in sweet dreams
Loved it thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 14, 2013

thank you mcd wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

SweetnNeatKingston, JamaicaNov 14, 2013

@DH. Awwwww...the sweet words of love

Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi USANov 14, 2013

Hi Liam,
Good write my friend,
Ken

orientalkoruGlenella, Queensland AustraliaNov 14, 2013

pure bliss...sweet...I'd dream every night if it means a ticket to paradise...

nonsmokerWaterford, IrelandNov 15, 2013

Nice Dark Horse,
If smooth was a sin you'd be burning.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 15, 2013

diana thank you deeply beautiful comment greatly appreciated

localpoetCannock, Staffordshire, England UKNov 15, 2013

thanks for the inspiration. good write nice challenge

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 15, 2013

fiona thank you so much for the amazing beautiful comment appreciated deeply

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoNov 15, 2013

Nicely Done Liam. Good romantic flair.

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 15, 2013

gnj4u thank you ever so much for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaNov 15, 2013

Just enough to put that smile on ones face,

beautiful

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 16, 2013

yankee that sound quite the treat wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 16, 2013

rob dear friend thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated

soulgoddessTokyo, Kanto JapanNov 16, 2013

Love the sensual message in this piece

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 16, 2013

Just breathtakingly beautiful, Liam. Thanks for this delightful read..

SR

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 16, 2013

martina thank you dear friend for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 17, 2013

sweetaneat thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 17, 2013

ken thank you so much for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated dear friend

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandNov 17, 2013

orientalkru thank you for the very beautiful comment appreciated deeply