stars 14 word challenge

wayne34

by wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England, UK

Nov 2013 477 Views 10 comments

stars (14 word challenge)

Author: wayne34

stars bright
Twinkle
In the nite
Distant
They shine bright in the nite sky

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Posted: Nov 2013

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Comments (10)

darkhorse555

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandNov 21, 2013

oh nice one wayne

Serenity4two

Serenity4twoDonegal, IrelandNov 21, 2013

Hi Wayne ,
well we poets thought it was good to try Yankee's 40 word challenge ,
but you set the bar even higher with just 14 !
Thankyou for the challenge - I hope you enjoy reading our 14 word poems :-))
I enjoyed reading your poem "Stars"
Warm wishes -F

sundayrose1

sundayrose1san francisco, California USANov 21, 2013

Wayne thanks for this star studded write and the challenge. Its so beautiful.What is poetry, love.and romance without the stars.

Thanks
SR

mimzy333

mimzy333unknown, Washington USANov 21, 2013

its hard to describe a thing of beauty in 14 words, nice poem

rapturecapture

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandNov 21, 2013

Hi Wayne

Beautiful really lovely...

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxx

SweetnNeat

SweetnNeatKingston, JamaicaNov 21, 2013

14 Words put together beautifully

morgen90210

morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 23, 2013

simple and very nice

Yankee4you

Yankee4youSt. Albans, Vermont USANov 23, 2013

Wayne...nothing more awesome than looking at a canopy of stars

Odette67

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKNov 23, 2013

Nice one Wayne, the beauty of living in the country, I get to see the stars so clear without streets.

beautifulyou

beautifulyouNew York, USANov 23, 2013

such beautiful lights, they are
..ty wayne

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