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brush me with her lips
in painted scarlet
then lead me through the sunset
to the river of these dreams
for when the moon at last has risen
who will remember are names
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Posted: Dec 2013

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beautifulyou
They'll be no names...
i suspect only the joyous knowing of life, of being
ty elo gift
mimzy333
another gracefull write elo
Mizzy4
Hi Elo, as an architect of compacted poems which carry huge feeling and enormous beauty you are surely King. Respect........Mick. handshake
trurorob
Lots of emotions and so soft in its delivery.
Rob
sundayrose1
brush me with her lips
in painted scarlet
then lead me through the sunset
to the river of these dreams
for when the moon at last has risen
who will remember are names


Just awesome Elo...Very beautiful landscaped imagined between the words in each line...

As usual, my pleasure in reading your beautiful writing...

Merry Christmas..

SR

bouquet bouquet gift gift
rapturecapture
Hi elo

Names!...are chosen and given...from a Parents view... of what you should be in their eyes...what it means/stands/ to them,and their true wish for you! from that very first kiss till...
nobodys perfect!...
But?
A Brush will do me...thank youangel
As always love your amazing style

Lots of warm wishes sent your way this Christmas e.l.o.
Thank you for sharing
Martina xxxhug bouquet lips
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