we all search for love, to make us complete, to find our true soulmate, why that would be sweet, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ we all have desires, we all have our dream, our search never tires, or so it would seem, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ will love come and find us, will love become true, will you ever find me, or will i find you, ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ but what if we fail, then how will we cope, will true love prevail, we all live in hope......
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
first bit of poetry ive tried in years..sorry about the abbreviations and presentation,i aint that good on a computer keyboard........
Hello Twazzle , Welcome --good to see you over here in the poet's corner I enjoyed reading your poem .. So much truth in your words Well done , and hope to read more of your poetry in the future- F
twazzle70OPTHE GORGOYNES......, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKJan 9, 2014
thankyou very much serenity ,i used to love dabbling in a bit of rhyme,its nice to have a place to post such material..im glad you like it...thankyou..
So much truth in this.. Never apologize .. Poetry is an expression of your inner soul... You can lay it out anyway or anyhow you want. That's the beauty of posting in this corner... We are as individual as our fingerprints... I have enjoyed reading your poem... Keep them coming
beautifulyouNew York, USAMay 15, 2015
hi twazzle,
i enjoyed reading your poem ... to finding true love, within and without
twazzle70OPTHE GORGOYNES......, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKMay 17, 2015
Hello Beautiful.. Very nice of you to say.....Thankyou..
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandMay 19, 2015
Words from the heart...so well said.I loved this poem.Thank you for your thoughts.
twazzle70OPTHE GORGOYNES......, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKMay 19, 2015
Thankyou very much indeed Paloma.... So very kind of you..
Wow In the sixties and early seventies we use to walk around saying to one another " I feel ya man" and after reading this I can honestly say , I feel ya man. Good poem
peachmelbawexford, Wexford IrelandMay 21, 2015
Helo Twazzle isn't life wonderful when we can dream and dare to hope for what we so desire in out heart
Then let go and maybe just maybe something magical is about to start,
When we are free of grasping a thought so tight ,
Maybe just maybe luour love and lover will be just tight she alays had you within her sight,
Well done twazzle,
l .
twazzle70OPTHE GORGOYNES......, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKMay 21, 2015
Thankyou Happygolucky (lovely username by the way)... I feel ya..!!!!!...
twazzle70OPTHE GORGOYNES......, East Riding of Yorkshire, England UKMay 21, 2015
Hello MissPeachMelba,,luv the way you make youre words rhyme,,tiz charming.. Thankyou for youre kind comments..
Comments (19)
Welcome --good to see you over here in the poet's corner
I enjoyed reading your poem ..
So much truth in your words
Well done , and hope to read more of your poetry in the future- F
Lovely poem...
Thanks for sharing
Phyllis
Never stop looking !
Mick.
N
i enjoyed reading your poem
... to finding true love, within and without
In the sixties and early seventies we use to walk around saying to one another " I feel ya man" and after reading this I can honestly say , I feel ya man. Good poem
Then let go and maybe just maybe something magical is about to start,
When we are free of grasping a thought so tight ,
Maybe just maybe luour love and lover will be just tight she alays had you within her sight,
Well done twazzle,
l .