LOST IN THOUGHT..

Do you hear me,im trying to speak
so very young,emotionally weak
my innner thoughts,my only voice
think in silence,its not a choice.


Got things to say,to speak my mind
will you listen,it would be kind
look out the window,and dream away
a silent soul,the mind will play.


Thoughts they come,and then they go
what will be next,you never know
a spinning top,a mind so full
imagination becomes so dull


Years roll by,its still the same
fears and thoughts,an endless game
a healthy mind,a vital tool
dont overthink,dont be a fool...
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Posted: Jul 2015
About this poem:
Short rhyme about thoughts and theyre impact on our lives...I think..

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nonsmoker
Very nice Twazzle.

I think I have that Tee-Shirt laugh wine
twazzle70
laugh And the badge my friend...
Cheers Non..bouquet
2intrigued
A great, thought provoking poem Twazz yay

I've got the trophy. snooty laugh hug
twazzle70
Thankyou 2int..bouquet
Hope said trophy is proudly displayed in youre trophy cabinet..laugh hug
Mizzy4
Nicely written Twazzle !

I enjoyed your take on the subject....beer

Regards Mick.
twazzle70
Thankyou Mick..
Thats very nice of you to say my friend..
Cheers..cheers
marikia
Nice poem, easy to remember thanks to a good flowing rhyme, interesting content, based on wisdom gained with time, very close to what I experience. With your permission I will copy it into my files.
Thank you for sharing, dear poet!thumbs up tip hat wine
rapturecapture
Hi Twazzle


I enjoyed reading Lost In Thought very nice indeed

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug bouquet
twazzle70
Hi Marikia..bouquet
You are so right when you say "based on experience with wisdom and time"..
Spot on...wine Thankyou very much for youre lovely comment,and you are more than welcome to copy to youre files..
I would consider it an honour if you did..bouquet hug
twazzle70
Hello Martina. hug

So pleased you enjoyed my words,and very nice of you to say so.teddybear
I appreciate youre comment very much.
Thankyou.

Neil.wine hug bouquet
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