With Final Burst------villanelle

With final burst of golden rays
sun sets below the horizon
day fades away and here night stays

From south gentle warm breeze plays
luring forward pretty siren
with final burst of golden rays

Siren calls hearts are set ablaze
and rising up comes Poseidon
day fades away and here night stays

Together they play in the bays
ride waves on the crest of Zion
with final burst of golden rays

There is no more time for delays
a merry nod to Orion
day fades away and here night stays

As departing we go our ways
as daylight for us is poison
With final burst of golden rays
day fades away and here night stays
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Posted: Jan 2014

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shadow1950
ty Liam appreciated pal hug kiss wine
rapturecapture
Hi Shadow

I really no nothing about poetry, other then its a way of expression something on your mind...You have posted many different styles that really moved me ...This style and Title along with your thoughts is quite powerful reading...I have read it over a few times now...and its just electric...

Thank you for sharing

Lots of love

Martina xxx hug angel wave
Ravensgold
Hi Shadow,I enjoyed the style of this piece very muchhandshake wine
shadow1950
ty Martina I have learned so much since I started on here this is one of my personal favourite forms so expressive glad you enjoyed it hug wine kiss
shadow1950
hey there Raven long time, ty so much hug wine kiss
shadow1950
hi Robert pleased you enjoyed it ty hug kiss wine
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