Elegant Lover

Her skin illuminates like the reflection of the moon
Smell of camellia sways with her deep blooded hair
Yet standing there like a fragile child

Picking up my cold heart with her warm hands
Press against my chest and holding on
Tears running from her eyes but she cracked a smile

Caring and loving as if she is my wife
Holding my hands and laid her eyes upon mine
Her hazy eyes pierce into my mind

Bringing up endless pain of broken hearts
She whispered gentle words into my ear:
“You should not be wavering by lost sight of me but by my love for you, as you loved for me”
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Posted: Jan 2014
About this poem:
It is about a dream I had. It clarifies that I was afraid of commitment to a woman as my dream was to be a good husband. It reflected of how I see myself as a man with no will and that I need to trust her regardless of the pain I had already endured. The woman symbolized this, she is not the real thing.

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TAR_734
Beautifully moving piece...very, very touching!
Excellent Work!...thank you for sharing.
"Bravo"applause
Robert (Sinclair)
rapturecapture
Hi Nouv

I really like this....very magical and beautiful

Thank you for sharinghug angel wave
darkhorse555
very beautifully penned pieceangel wine
Mr_Nouv
Thank you everyone! ^_^)/
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