was any of it real

are we all
just a hoard
of writers
i look
at you all
as extended
friends and family
everyone knows me
they know how i feel
about you love

i thought
you love me
or is that
just to be heard
in beautiful paradise
and trying to get
to know me

it was
an amazing experience
who want's to be
a millionaire
the whole thing
just blew my mind
so very beautiful
glowing my inner eye
i never seen anything
really bad that i done
or even sad for that matter
or even what i said
if it is miss interpeted
in any shape nor form
i am so sorry darling
if in any way
i offended you
or upset you
in any way

i thought
that i had something
for real this time
all i have ever wanted
to do sweetest heart
to show you
something beautiful

even over thousands
of miles apart
i adored you
you where my
early morning dew
the stars in the sky
sprinkling light
my fairy tale

you got me honey
hook line and sinker
maybe i am just
very very naive
to thing
you would
love me darling
from so far away

sometimes with
you baby
i feel
such a softness
in my heart
exploding you
like it was fit
to burst

i will shower
you all over
with roses
how i feel
loving you darling
it touched me
in the deepest ocean

your docked
in the port
of my life
wishing i was
all over you honey
butterflying kissing
your neck
whispering softly
i love you
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
darling i am so sorry if i ever offended never was it my intentions
let me know where we go from here as i was planing our time when you come here or was it all just a pipe dream if you cannot see that i love you and all i want to do is see you happy beautiful angela i am sorry

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Stedan
Hope things can be mended and that all is not lost,
sometimes we say the wrong things at the wrong time,
it is very difficult to retract what is said even though
you know what was meant. Hoping that the romance and love
continues heart wings
sundayrose1
very sad. very painful. love and pain sorrows and passion
are one and the same. (OSHO, KAHLIL GIBRAN)

Rise above. Love is never easy. The heart has a mind all its own. Yet the mind leaves the heart alone. I know how much love there is for the both of you. I'm crying as I'm writing this, so you know.

I LOVE YOU BOTH. LET YOUR RADIANCE REFLECTS LOVE TOALL.

BUT LOVE ONLY EACH OTHER.

I PRAY.

sundayrose. your friend till theres no mor life in me.

I love you both.


sad flower
morgen90210
Liam it's time to take a step back and recollect the things you both discussed, you quickly have to find out where you went wrong.
and go tell her what a blabbering fool you are and don't stop. . now is the test of your undying love to her
you made it this far, and now you fell,
get up forget the pain and continue to pursue
her
remember how much she means to you,
good luck
Mizzy4
Hi Liam,, sad write......I'm remembering all the
Good Stuff between ye......also what other poets
said.....Odette reckons you have to smell someone
Or touch someone
I hope this is not gone...if it were me
I'd book a flight........
Best wishes......Mick hug
darkhorse555
i hope so to dear friend as i really fell for her i feel this on line stuff everything gets blown out of context i never meant any harm on love i hope and pray i thought she was sent from above thats how good it felt for me so please god it works as its the last time if this does not work for me i have already thought about it i just pray she can see me i thought were really it the fairytale thank you so much dear friend for your kind words deeply appreciatedangel
Redex
Oh my hug good you can write how you feel and not let it fester inside.
I wish you wellteddybear
mimzy333
liam I have had my heart wrenched so maney times that I have grown cold to the romance protrayed in words alone. I have learnd that in internet dateing feelings and emotions need to be set aside untill I acctually meet the person and can see and feel the reality of the dream. I have had over 30 heart wrenching experiences over the last 4 almost 5 yrs of being here, so I know if hope will not fail me it surley will not fail you.
Spartacus2012
Hey Liam,

Keep the dream of love alive my friend..

Kendrink pouring
TAR_734
jaw drop
Robertcomfort
hug
darkhorse555
ah phyliss i feel so much pain love is the highest goal and so much love for angela in the heart i only have eyes for her yeah i admit i have said a few prayers myself just hope he hears me thank you for being such a sweet beautiful friend god bless you thank you so very much deeply appreciated
angel beer
sundayrose1
Of course my dear Liam, just because once in a while the wind blows so strong and so full of force it is beyond us humans to endure, doesn't mean the perfect wind won't come back.

It does.

SRbouquet
darkhorse555
morgen taking a step back now i know where it went wrong she means the world to me thank you dear friend for the heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel cheers
darkhorse555
so very true mick wish i had taken your advice dear friend thank you kindly dear friend truly beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel cheers
darkhorse555
sometimes writing how you feel gets one into trouble silence is the festering part without communication wonderful comment redex dear friend communication is 50 per cent of a relationship thank you kindly deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
mimzy dear friend bless you so hard on line at times so many wires get crossed thank you so very kindly deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
ken dear friend deeply appreciated wonderful comment thank you so much palangel cheers
darkhorse555
robert thank you kindly for your comment deeply appreciatedangel cheers
darkhorse555
phyllis dear friend praying for the gentle winds beautiful comment dear friend thank you kindly deeply appreciatedangel cheers
benidorm
Darkhorse.

Unreal how you can have so much feelings with someone
you never met embraced or touched.
I have had this happen to me to.
Be careful with your heart it really hurts the distance thing.
darkhorse555
twinself thank you so kindly truly an amazing beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel wine
weemick1960
It Isn't now, so move on Liam. Come on, things come to an end. Just because you love, it doesn't mean you have to be loved. Time to be a man and move on. Time to leave Angela alone.
darkhorse555
benidone you felt that feeling to god love you wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciatedangel
darkhorse555
the truth of the matter now i am begging to see the woman she is sad wonderful comment dearest friend one day you might know what i am saying i just shake my head it was all a game in a dream that i believed it crashed and burned just before my eyes she began putting obstacles up i found to be quite harsh left in hell never seem to ever get out of darkness but this one time i saw a fairy tale i fell in love shoot me i am human smiling thank you from the heart dear friendangel
darkhorse555
ps maybe i am looking towards my friends for support in my time of need while certain individuals treat me as a fool and a joke for loving someone how hurtful yes i love angela i still see her as my dream its not all my fault i have been publically humilated more than once dumped by poems yet i forgave so who is the better man in this as i am met with a wall of silence not even a comment i see a loveless act yet some are to blind to see angel
Poetnumber1
Hi Liam I concur with Mike. Like Mike I am not going to tell you what you want to hear or else I would never be a true friend. You need to man up and move on! Its the end but you still have life so its not the end of the world. Once there is life there are new possibilities that will come your way. Cheers wine
darkhorse555
mm dear friend love never leaves its the loveless acts without friendship that hurts the most draws very little love just cold feelings which is not spiritually right i always forgive not a shallow person in fact i am a good man just being made a fool of costs nothing love and friendship a giftangel
Bajanshay
Hi Liam,
Take all the time you need to heal. Prayers for you and remember one day at a time.hug comfort teddybear
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