are we all just a hoard of writers i look at you all as extended friends and family everyone knows me they know how i feel about you love
i thought you love me or is that just to be heard in beautiful paradise and trying to get to know me
it was an amazing experience who want's to be a millionaire the whole thing just blew my mind so very beautiful glowing my inner eye i never seen anything really bad that i done or even sad for that matter or even what i said if it is miss interpeted in any shape nor form i am so sorry darling if in any way i offended you or upset you in any way
i thought that i had something for real this time all i have ever wanted to do sweetest heart to show you something beautiful
even over thousands of miles apart i adored you you where my early morning dew the stars in the sky sprinkling light my fairy tale
you got me honey hook line and sinker maybe i am just very very naive to thing you would love me darling from so far away
sometimes with you baby i feel such a softness in my heart exploding you like it was fit to burst
i will shower you all over with roses how i feel loving you darling it touched me in the deepest ocean
your docked in the port of my life wishing i was all over you honey butterflying kissing your neck whispering softly i love you
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Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
darling i am so sorry if i ever offended never was it my intentions let me know where we go from here as i was planing our time when you come here or was it all just a pipe dream if you cannot see that i love you and all i want to do is see you happy beautiful angela i am sorry
StedanLiverpool, Merseyside, England UKFeb 18, 2014
Hope things can be mended and that all is not lost, sometimes we say the wrong things at the wrong time, it is very difficult to retract what is said even though you know what was meant. Hoping that the romance and love continues
sundayrose1san francisco, California USAFeb 18, 2014
very sad. very painful. love and pain sorrows and passion are one and the same. (OSHO, KAHLIL GIBRAN)
Rise above. Love is never easy. The heart has a mind all its own. Yet the mind leaves the heart alone. I know how much love there is for the both of you. I'm crying as I'm writing this, so you know.
I LOVE YOU BOTH. LET YOUR RADIANCE REFLECTS LOVE TOALL.
BUT LOVE ONLY EACH OTHER.
I PRAY.
sundayrose. your friend till theres no mor life in me.
I love you both.
morgen90210singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeFeb 18, 2014
Liam it's time to take a step back and recollect the things you both discussed, you quickly have to find out where you went wrong. and go tell her what a blabbering fool you are and don't stop. . now is the test of your undying love to her you made it this far, and now you fell, get up forget the pain and continue to pursue her remember how much she means to you, good luck
Hi Liam,, sad write......I'm remembering all the Good Stuff between ye......also what other poets said.....Odette reckons you have to smell someone Or touch someone I hope this is not gone...if it were me I'd book a flight........ Best wishes......Mick
i hope so to dear friend as i really fell for her i feel this on line stuff everything gets blown out of context i never meant any harm on love i hope and pray i thought she was sent from above thats how good it felt for me so please god it works as its the last time if this does not work for me i have already thought about it i just pray she can see me i thought were really it the fairytale thank you so much dear friend for your kind words deeply appreciated
RedexNorthumberland, England UKFeb 18, 2014
Oh my good you can write how you feel and not let it fester inside. I wish you well
mimzy333unknown, Washington USAFeb 18, 2014
liam I have had my heart wrenched so maney times that I have grown cold to the romance protrayed in words alone. I have learnd that in internet dateing feelings and emotions need to be set aside untill I acctually meet the person and can see and feel the reality of the dream. I have had over 30 heart wrenching experiences over the last 4 almost 5 yrs of being here, so I know if hope will not fail me it surley will not fail you.
ah phyliss i feel so much pain love is the highest goal and so much love for angela in the heart i only have eyes for her yeah i admit i have said a few prayers myself just hope he hears me thank you for being such a sweet beautiful friend god bless you thank you so very much deeply appreciated
sundayrose1san francisco, California USAFeb 19, 2014
Of course my dear Liam, just because once in a while the wind blows so strong and so full of force it is beyond us humans to endure, doesn't mean the perfect wind won't come back.
morgen taking a step back now i know where it went wrong she means the world to me thank you dear friend for the heartfelt beautiful comment deeply appreciated
sometimes writing how you feel gets one into trouble silence is the festering part without communication wonderful comment redex dear friend communication is 50 per cent of a relationship thank you kindly deeply appreciated
phyllis dear friend praying for the gentle winds beautiful comment dear friend thank you kindly deeply appreciated
benidormwellington, Wellington New ZealandMar 29, 2014
Darkhorse.
Unreal how you can have so much feelings with someone you never met embraced or touched. I have had this happen to me to. Be careful with your heart it really hurts the distance thing.
It Isn't now, so move on Liam. Come on, things come to an end. Just because you love, it doesn't mean you have to be loved. Time to be a man and move on. Time to leave Angela alone.
the truth of the matter now i am begging to see the woman she is sad wonderful comment dearest friend one day you might know what i am saying i just shake my head it was all a game in a dream that i believed it crashed and burned just before my eyes she began putting obstacles up i found to be quite harsh left in hell never seem to ever get out of darkness but this one time i saw a fairy tale i fell in love shoot me i am human smiling thank you from the heart dear friend
ps maybe i am looking towards my friends for support in my time of need while certain individuals treat me as a fool and a joke for loving someone how hurtful yes i love angela i still see her as my dream its not all my fault i have been publically humilated more than once dumped by poems yet i forgave so who is the better man in this as i am met with a wall of silence not even a comment i see a loveless act yet some are to blind to see
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 30, 2014
Hi Liam I concur with Mike. Like Mike I am not going to tell you what you want to hear or else I would never be a true friend. You need to man up and move on! Its the end but you still have life so its not the end of the world. Once there is life there are new possibilities that will come your way. Cheers
mm dear friend love never leaves its the loveless acts without friendship that hurts the most draws very little love just cold feelings which is not spiritually right i always forgive not a shallow person in fact i am a good man just being made a fool of costs nothing love and friendship a gift
BajanshayBridgetown, Saint Michael BarbadosMar 30, 2014
Hi Liam, Take all the time you need to heal. Prayers for you and remember one day at a time.
Comments (27)
sometimes we say the wrong things at the wrong time,
it is very difficult to retract what is said even though
you know what was meant. Hoping that the romance and love
continues
are one and the same. (OSHO, KAHLIL GIBRAN)
Rise above. Love is never easy. The heart has a mind all its own. Yet the mind leaves the heart alone. I know how much love there is for the both of you. I'm crying as I'm writing this, so you know.
I LOVE YOU BOTH. LET YOUR RADIANCE REFLECTS LOVE TOALL.
BUT LOVE ONLY EACH OTHER.
I PRAY.
sundayrose. your friend till theres no mor life in me.
I love you both.
and go tell her what a blabbering fool you are and don't stop. . now is the test of your undying love to her
you made it this far, and now you fell,
get up forget the pain and continue to pursue
her
remember how much she means to you,
good luck
Good Stuff between ye......also what other poets
said.....Odette reckons you have to smell someone
Or touch someone
I hope this is not gone...if it were me
I'd book a flight........
Best wishes......Mick
I wish you well
Keep the dream of love alive my friend..
Ken
Robert
It does.
SR
Unreal how you can have so much feelings with someone
you never met embraced or touched.
I have had this happen to me to.
Be careful with your heart it really hurts the distance thing.
Take all the time you need to heal. Prayers for you and remember one day at a time.