TIMELINE of LOVE

One minute
without you is
bearable

One hour
without you is
meaningless

One day
without you is
agonizing

One week
without you is
unimaginable

One year
without you is
impossible

One life
without you is
hell on earth

One love
with you is like
heaven on earth
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Feb 2014
About this poem:
I thought about what real deep love should feel like and this is the result and my first tried poem ever.

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Comments (8)

madtat29
Yup.....drinking Twitterpatedprofessor
morgen90210
what an impactful poem!professor
welcome to the Sanctuary. . .
I am Ancient Bullman
and please don't call me Eddie!

Just had to say that !rolling on the floor laughing
BBMis4me
Mmmm..... You said this is your first one?confused
I don't believe thatscold
This poem is excellent applause

Welcome to Poet's corner HardBeat!!!

A hug and Blessingshug
Stellangel
Redex
Brilliant applause welcome to the corner hope we get more from you.teddybear
Ahyra
Very nice HeartBeat. Welcome to our little corner :) bouquet
steve1223
Really enjoyed reading this ... look forward to more ... welcome

bouquet
Poetnumber1
Nicely done for your first poem. Welcome to the corner Hardbeat.
mimzy333
bravo...this is so well written
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