sweet surrender

oh honey
sweet bee
upon the sweetest
freshly scented blossoms
in a silent
sweeping lavender
cool breeze
blows ever
so gently out

rising with
the scent
of a deep ocean
whispering across
great many seas
waves crashing
against walls

on my knees
holding out
opening up
treasures sparkle
golden opens gates
with a key
of love

a sprinkling
of magic dust
sugar coating princess
totally cast under
a deep spell
surrendering with you
sweet surrender
in loves spell
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2014

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TAR_734
laugh Liam, this poem makes me want to surrender
to the sweet smell, and delicious nectar, to be drowned
in the deep spell of love with...someone...(L)...laugh
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, Yummy!
Yummy Love Poem by the "Master", once again!yay heart wings wow thumbs up
Roberthug heart beating
cheers
grin

tip hat dancing dog elephant joy
laugh
Mizzy4
Well woven together Liam,
I hope Angie surrenders.......
Mick.
handshake cheers
Angel04
Beautiful and romantic from the deepest ocean to the sweet scented blossoms, simply beautifullove love hug hug kiss kiss
darkhorse555
robert dear friend thank you kindly wonderful comment beautiful deeply appreciatedangel cheers
darkhorse555
THANK you mick for the beautiful comment i pray she does smiling deeply appreciated dear friendangel cheers
lindsyjonesonline today!
surrendering with you
sweet surrender
in loves spell


My dear friend Liam, all the passions your heart can hold and more is oozing so deep for her (Angela) that holds the key to your loving heart.

Just awesome my dearest lovers and like Robert said, it is so powerful to make us all surrender...Although I know exactly how that is with him that I have loved so much...

Love you both.

ljbouquet
TAR_734
hehehehe laugh you slay me, LJ!angel laugh yay rolling on the floor laughing
darkhorse555
wonderful comment chrissie thank you kindly dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
Redex
Another beautiful love poem, When you two get together the night skys will be full of little and big explosions. laugh teddybear
darkhorse555
thank you angela sweetheart for the scented blossoms heartfeltheart beating bouquet
darkhorse555
phyliss dear friend thank you for the very beautiful comment deeply appreciatedangel
darkhorse555
robert thank you for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated angel
darkhorse555
redex dear friend thank you for the delightfully beautiful comment heartfelt appreciatedangel
fjamesj9701
Sweet stuff my friend, well done Mr LDH. Hows the duck been btw…Jessehandshake
darkhorse555
jesse dear friend thank you dear friend smiling for the sweet beautiful comment appreciated deeply palangel grin
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