playing a fiddle

by darkhorse555Donegal, Ireland

Mar 2014 470 Views 14 comments

playing a fiddle[senryu]

Author: darkhorse555

upon the fiddle
play it long enough you will
become the fiddler

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Posted: Mar 2014

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TAR_734unknown, Missouri USAMar 11, 2014

Thanks buddy!

Nice work!

Robert

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 11, 2014

Nice work Liam,
I like this........Mick.

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoMar 11, 2014

Cool stuff Liam. So now you're a fiddler.

Angel04gympie, Queensland AustraliaMar 11, 2014

I played the violin for quite a few years
and can tute quite a tune, does that count

online today!

lindsyjonesunknown, California USAMar 11, 2014

Liam, for the first time allow me to acknowledge quite a change in your write,. first time I read you in three lines..

Take care my friend..

phyllis

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAMar 11, 2014

Hi, darkhorse555,
Thanks for providing the poetic form used. Since I was unfamiliar with senryu, I looked it up (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Senryu) and, in turn, came across info on a haiku society (http://www.hsa-haiku.org/index.htm). All of this because you delighted us with your senryu. As we all prepare to become the fiddler, I thank you for sharing.

Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKMar 11, 2014

upon the fiddle
play it long enough you will
become the fiddler

Very nice Liam.

mimzy333unknown, Washington USAMar 11, 2014

there are more players then true fiddlers these days

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 11, 2014

thank you robert very much beautiful comment deeply appreciated

ladyjewelDurban, KwaZulu-Natal South AfricaMar 11, 2014

ooh I agree, now I just have to find the right fiddler

maybe I need to tune the fiddle first

sorry coundn't help myself

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 11, 2014

thank you so much mick wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 11, 2014

mm thank you mm dear friend very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

darkhorse555OPdonegal, Donegal IrelandMar 11, 2014

remember this one on fanstory darling I love really beautiful haunting air the violin would be a dream to watch you play love your tune sweet honey a classic in my mind