Noctis

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Mar 2014 556 Views 18 comments

Noctis

Author: Spartacus2012

Mi alma, you need
to know I adore you
I am falling in love
my heart speaks
I often suffer
shed a tear
all of this is hard to take
I implore you to listen
and understand me
in the name of my last hope...

Of the night
many have passed
without you I am stricken
absent sleep
my nights are moonless
so bleak and somber
now in your silence
there is only confusion
all this madness

I need you to tell me
what are your thoughts
for our future?

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Mar 2014

About this poem:

With you or without you,
there's no help for my suffering
with you, because you kill me,
without you, because I die...

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Comments (18)

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMar 28, 2014

Awww I hope the two of you can figure out a common ground for the both of you. All my best to the two of you. Remember it takes two to make a relationship and good communication is the key.may peace and happiness come to the both of you

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMar 28, 2014

heart touching deep beautifully crafted ken dear friend i relate god bless

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 28, 2014

Thank you Girly!

Ken

niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 28, 2014

Pulled from heartfelt feelings......no one can disguise, true feelings......great write Kathy

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainMar 28, 2014

Hey Ken thats the downside of love, but aint it great!!, nice write.
Rob

Mizzy4Navan, Meath IrelandMar 28, 2014

Very sad heartfelt write Ken,
Best wishes......Mick.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 28, 2014

Thank you Kathy for visiting!

Ken

LaFleurBleubuda, Texas USAMar 28, 2014

Aiyee! That's intense.

I hope you're not that easily overtaken in reality.

You're a great writer though.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 28, 2014

Hi Rob,
Thanks for visiting!

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 28, 2014

Thanks Liam for stopping by!

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 28, 2014

Hi Mick,
Thanks for your support..

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 28, 2014

thank you LaFleur for the lovely visit..

Ken

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKMar 28, 2014

Hi Ken, another sad write. I really hope things turn out for you my friend. Once again you tell It from the heart. I feel your hurt friend. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAMar 28, 2014

Hi Mike,
Thanks for stopping by..Everything is cool as I kind of took some poetic license with this write..

Ken