Hidden Heart

May 2014 555 Views 14 comments

Hidden Heart

Your heart is like a crock of gold,kept safe and hidden beneath your many colours.No matter how hard i try to reach you,with each passing field the further you are away from me.So i sit,and rest,and gaze at your beauty for as long as your here.

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Posted: May 2014

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darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandMay 8, 2014

beautifully crafted excellent vision

GregorysPeckOPCork, IrelandMay 8, 2014

Thank you,my first attempt at poetry.

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 8, 2014

Hi Gregory

Beautiful thoughts...lovely read

Thank you for sharing

rapturecapturekerry, Kerry IrelandMay 8, 2014

Hi Gregory

Beautiful thoughts...lovely read

Thank you for sharing

JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandMay 8, 2014

Poem is good.
Not as good as your Pen name!
What does "not single/not looking" mean?
Only an Irishman would consider getting drunk an equal balance.

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAMay 8, 2014

Heartfelt write...I love the appreciation of the now.

GregorysPeckOPCork, IrelandMay 8, 2014

Ha ha Jean,i suppose your right.Thank you for your comment.The poem should answer your question.

GregorysPeckOPCork, IrelandMay 8, 2014

Thank you jazzy75.Thats because troubles of the heart have a habbit of staying in the now.

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAMay 9, 2014

Heartfelt poem

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 9, 2014

Heartfelt thoughtful poem

So you sit, and rest,and gaze at her beauty... waiting if she will make her mind?

I like it

GregorysPeckOPCork, IrelandMay 9, 2014

No,i finally realised i could never have her.

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 9, 2014

Oh,when did you relised that you will never have her;while writing poem or after

So sad

and lovely -touching heartfelt poem

As an word of comfort I like the quote;'one door closes for another to open but if you look for so long at the closed door you may not see the door that has been open for you'...

123whisperMelbourne, Victoria AustraliaMay 9, 2014

I like to think that in our life people comes and goes for a reason to enlighten our foothpath for another experience to learn some lessons...If she opened the door of your closet mind it was all worth while

GregorysPeckOPCork, IrelandMay 10, 2014

Yes it was and i have no regrets,thank you 123whisper.

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