You were my moment that moment of "aha" Destiny I saw How? Why? Without a flaw An unwritten law Of attraction, a distraction So elegant was the extraction Perhaps, of dreams and life Completely free from strife So effortlessly embarked The cosmos, which mapped This journey full of rapt To the end, the dream Not believing it’s pretend The longing, waiting, so long Be strong, we belong This composed song Of words that delight Brings feelings hard to fight Emotions from the heart That plays the complex part Imagery of art, to start Flowing like a chart With passion to impart The first hello, the voice I had no choice Like a tender touch Filled with such newness So, so much Words as soft as breath Gentle I confess Thank you for the call It was like a fly ball A masked ball The Wailing Wall A prayer shawl My rag doll Meant to enthrall A weight-bearing wall Peace, once and for all All I can say now How, my love, how? The perfect plan Of just one man Sharing a dream Beautiful theme This is what life is for Being with the one The only one you adore Forever more
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Posted: Jul 2014
About this poem:
Just dreaming with the stars in a fantasy and living in faith and hope!
Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAJul 26, 2014
Awesome poem!, I love all of the rhyming beautifully done
JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandJul 26, 2014
Ah yes...."The perfect plan of just one man..."
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJul 26, 2014
Wow! This is really remarkable Jeanie. I like the way it flows downward smoothly as out of a clear picture of water. Cafe
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAJul 26, 2014
Oops! I wrote the wrong name. Of course I meant to say Imaginelove. Now, of course I must be disciplined which means six women must blindfold me and do what they will.
Hi Imagine, a fine piece you have written here. Myself, sometimes I would rather dream the dream than live the dream. We all seek the peace of the one. Your thoughts flow so well down the page. Love, the ultimate dream, may It be found. I enjoyed the read Imagine. Love sometimes comes when we least expect It. Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
ImagineLoveOPVenus, Montana USAJul 26, 2014
Cafe..me and the other 5 women are ready!
ImagineLoveOPVenus, Montana USAJul 26, 2014
JeanieMac, Girlygirl and Mike....thank you my fellow poets and Idealists..of which I am sure all of us are! We do have to feel it!
Comments (9)
flows downward smoothly as out of a clear picture of
water.
Cafe
Imaginelove. Now, of course I must be disciplined which
means six women must blindfold me and do what they will.
Cafe
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.