Cabin in Winter

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I want to paint a picture of a rather simple design
And softly place it upon the canvas of your mind
It’s hidden in a forest amidst the coldness of winter
Built by the strong hands of a long forgotten carpenter

An old wooden cabin standing solemn and still
Under the hushed white blanket of a winter chill
A distant faint crackling is the only sound heard
Within the quiet forest as the snow falls undisturbed

Interlaced with peaceful silence encompassed all around
As the gentle beguiling snow falls silently to the ground
Delightful winter dances held in a crystal light show
In reflections of a mesmerizing shimmering glow

This is a lover’s hideaway my visions descriptively imagine
With a fire of hot embers feeding flames of deep passion
A secret rendezvous wrapped up in a warm romantic cloak
My senses smell the fire in the billowing chimney smoke

A seducing hazy atmosphere fills the air with desire
Deepening the lovemaking that soon will transpire
Together as one, cares tossed and no concerns
Captured in beauty only nature adorns

Lovers partaking in the magic elixir called tranquility
Bathed in soothing love and warm sheltering harmony
Hidden in the forest sharing silence and peace
Vowing that this moment will never cease

Under one blanket peacefully sitting by the fire
Wearing selflessness and nakedness as their attire
The scene touches my mind, soul, heart and being
Sipping love that is so sublime and freeing

On a timeless soul journey depicted in this visional art
Like a beautiful love song brought unpretentiously to heart
My imagination a silent partaker of the secret rendezvous
How I dream to meet that lover that soothes my longing spirit
The kind of love born, nurtured and distinctively inherent

Wrapped in a blanket of passion that will take me to that cabin
That cabin in the woods, in the winter of our lives
A place where promises to one another thrives
The cabin that silently waits in the forest in winter
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Posted: Dec 2014
About this poem:
Where I live there are many cabins on lakes. In winter, they stand alone and solemn. This is my vision and journey to these lovely wooden cabins, in winter. Peace, love and blessings this winter season and always!

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Comments (11)

bard76
Wow!!!! Simple fantastic, a joy to read...... you have skills, beyond the imagination.....Will look forward to your next master piece.........David...
Spartacus2012
A truly serene write Jade..Buen trabajo!


Kenflower
Abby1963
Everything about this poem is stunning the picture fits perfectly with your poem . I get so much pleasure reading this I'm sure I'm gonna view it a few more times . teddybear
Semsu
I can feel all what your poem is telling about and because I have live my first 45 years in Finland and I know what that white snow is doing to that lonely wooden cabine in the nature, so when you are there inside, it is like completely peace and a soft awesome feeling as if being surounded with white cotton. When you have experience it once, you never forget the feeling.
48jojo
Nice read it puts me at peace, I have the land in the woods overlooking the lake but no wooden cabin is there just yet.
candykid
Love this story-tell style of writing. ......this a super-nice piece that is so perfectly appropriate for this time of year. .....the descriptions are perfect....thumbs up
avias
Expression is..."You nailed it"......so completely beautiful in a mind picture....hope it will come true for you..
this dream,this love...and in "that cabin in the winter".heart wings
trurorob
Very nicely done.
Rob
rapturecapture
Hi Imagine


A dream read...Truly beautiful!...bouquet

Thank you for sharing

Martina xxxhug teddybear
lindsyjones
My friend absolutely gorgeous.

Called you but the number is with someone.

Please call.
ImagineLove
Thank you all lovely and talented poets! I hope this story reached your imagination and heart with love! cheers hug teddybear
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