The great depression

Always It's like this wherever I roam,
Even in my very own home,
Surrounded by people I feel so alone,
The thought transports me to a twilight zone,
A dark scary place where noones my friend,
There sorrow and sadness never ends,
A hole in my heart like a hole in my head,
A taste in mouth that I cant get rid,
Like ripe rancid wine or old moldy bread,
The constant thoughts "I hate this trip",
And"I cant wait till the ride is overwith"
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Posted: Jul 2014
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Some of my finest dark poetry...

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Comments (12)

JEANIEMAC
This is fine..
Like a dark red wine.
I see we have sipped from the same cup.
darkhorse555
oh only to well i know that feeling beautifully written take care tony god blessangel wine
Mizzy4
Well penned Tony,
Its a lonely place to be.....
Lost in your own head !

Mick.
wine
SnowCoveredMuse
Nice write...
We have all been there!

SASconversing
madtat29
Ahh Jeanie...if you only could try some of my 09' merlot...sooo tasty...Ty for the comment dear hug
madtat29
Write on Liam...have a good one bud cheers
madtat29
Ty Mick. .it is a strange place in here sometimes... Thanks for reading and commenting on my poetry..I know its an aquired taste... handshake
madtat29
Thank you SAS ..I wish we all hadn't. .but then we wouldnt be here... conversing
Spartacus2012
Dark write that shines brother Tony!

Kentip hat
Nuwahri61
cool write Mad.....thats the darkest place on earth .....Regards Nucool
madtat29
Thanks Ken cheers
madtat29
Thanks Nu...gonna be the title of my next book..."Its dark in here" ..have a good one bud
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