Belly dance

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Aug 2014 2,301 Views 18 comments

Belly dance

Author: Spartacus2012

As she danced
for her man
she became
larger than life.

She danced
to be outside herself
larger and more beautiful
and more powerful...

She took his hand
and on the edge of the ocean
they danced
to the light of the moon..

She realized
life is the dancer
and we are the dance..

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Aug 2014

About this poem:

Thought I'd give it a try!

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Comments (18)

wayne34liverpool, Merseyside, England UKAug 25, 2014

Cool write very exotic poem

Girlygirl196349Fullerton, California USAAug 25, 2014

So beautiful this is

online today!

niah9Auckland, New ZealandAug 25, 2014

loved the idea....we are the dance....wow....nice one Spartacus.....K

darkhorse555donegal, Donegal IrelandAug 25, 2014

loved the dance ken beautifully penned dear friend

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 25, 2014

Thank you Wayne!

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 25, 2014

Thank you Laura!

Ken

paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandAug 25, 2014

Alluring dancer and and a beautiful poem to enhance the beauty.Thank you.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 25, 2014

Thank you Niah!

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 25, 2014

Thank you Liam!

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 25, 2014

My pleasure Paloma..Thank you for the kind comment!

Ken

Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoAug 27, 2014

Nice thought pattern to the challenge Ken! I loved the picture to.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 27, 2014

Thanks for the kind visit poet buddy..Always appreciated!

Ken

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoAug 27, 2014

nice....

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 27, 2014

Thanks Shelly!

Ken

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKAug 29, 2014

Oh, yes, I do remember!(This is the one w/the extras

)

And as beautiful as the pic may be to the guys, your poem is far more beautiful.

It starts out so unique and ends in pure beautiful.

Great write!

SCatlyn

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 29, 2014

Thank you SCatlyn for a lovely visit!

Ken

weemick1960Fife, Scotland UKAug 29, 2014

Hi Ken, thought I'd give It a try, It's right up your street partner. From the picture to your last line the beauty shines, as always. Another fine piece, well done partner.
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USAAug 30, 2014

Thanks for the visit Mike..Always appreciated!

Your friend,

Ken

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