Awakening you ponder
Mind begins to wander
Under dawn of lighted day
Drawing a complicated array
Of endless visions you replay
Always the Renaissance man
Dreaming dreams you can
Woven into a master plan
Searching for a real soul
Conjuring a fluid goal
Feelings floating sublime
Suspended in spatial time
Orbiting without boundaries
Vacillating over frequencies
Seeking a heart that’s free
Thoughts like a symphony
Creating an opportunity
Moving in rapid synchrony
Uplifting very rhythmically
Feelings used appealingly
Your contemplated reality
Is masked very artistically
Like jewels perfectly aligned
A love precisely designed
To lie upon the hidden alters
Within your confused mind
Comments (14)
space around the man you are given to see. Catch a falling star.
The mystery continues..
i smiled the whole way through this an excellent pen
(I'll work on that!)
I like the unusual rhyming pattern of the first four stanzas - but the poem in its entirety works very well.
An enjoyable read.
Best wishes
Bill
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
If you haven't noticed I am a "non conformist" in all areas of my life, I work better that way! Thanks for your comment! I was actually going for 5 stanzas with 2-3 rhymes. I think I worked it on this one!
I love your input!
Jade
Jade
Jade
You're thinking along
the right lines......
Ken