A Man

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Awakening you ponder
Mind begins to wander
Under dawn of lighted day
Drawing a complicated array
Of endless visions you replay

Always the Renaissance man
Dreaming dreams you can
Woven into a master plan
Searching for a real soul
Conjuring a fluid goal

Feelings floating sublime
Suspended in spatial time
Orbiting without boundaries
Vacillating over frequencies
Seeking a heart that’s free

Thoughts like a symphony
Creating an opportunity
Moving in rapid synchrony
Uplifting very rhythmically
Feelings used appealingly

Your contemplated reality
Is masked very artistically
Like jewels perfectly aligned
A love precisely designed
To lie upon the hidden alters
Within your confused mind
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Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
Deep thinking and contemplation today.

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Comments (14)

cafetwo2010
But nay my dear maiden..The woman in you bends time and
space around the man you are given to see. Catch a falling star.
The mystery continues..

cool
darkhorse555
a man cannot change who he is smiling always going to be a man lol
i smiled the whole way through this an excellent penangel thumbs up
ImagineLove
Thank you Liam, you are right! I was contemplating that when I wrote this! I should follow up with A Woman because we both have a wee bit of confused minds!laugh

(I'll work on that!) cheers hug purple heart
Fellsman
Hi Jade

I like the unusual rhyming pattern of the first four stanzas - but the poem in its entirety works very well.

An enjoyable read.

Best wishes

Bill wine wine
weemick1960
Hi Jade, another excellent write from your pen. Some of us are not quite that complicated. I did enjoy your thoughts. Each of us Is what we are. All different but who knows, maybe our thinking Is alike. I'll be the dreamer dreaming, I don't need anymore, just let me mind dream. Really enjoyed the write Jade.
Have a good day. Catch you later. Your Friend always....MIKE.
ImagineLove
Fellsman,
If you haven't noticed I am a "non conformist" in all areas of my life, I work better that way! Thanks for your comment! I was actually going for 5 stanzas with 2-3 rhymes. I think I worked it on this one!

I love your input! hug wine
Jadepurple heart
ImagineLove
Mike my Scottish friend! Thank you! I know you are the dreamer! Thanks for your comment! I had so many thoughts on this write when putting it down! You know I love men! rolling on the floor laughing
hug cheers Jade purple heart
ImagineLove
CafeJ...yes the mystery will continue! I am working on A Woman. We'll see where that leads me, I hope not into complete insanity! I love women too! I love everybody! hug cheers
Jade purple heart
Mizzy4
Beautiful write Jade,
You're thinking along
the right lines......

dancing hug
ImagineLove
Mizzy thank you for your kind words! You rock!!hug purple heart
Poetnumber1
Just lovely Jade. Some tight rhyming stanzas. A delightful read.
ImagineLove
Thank you my Poet friend! Rhyme is sublime! hug purple heart
Spartacus2012
Delightful write Jade..Enjoyed!


Ken
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ImagineLove
Thank you Ken my man! hug
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