its a mad idea i came up with in my head being honest christian thought i would try it out smiling thank you pal ever so much for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Hi, darkhorse555, While the story of love as written in this 5/7/5s smiling challenge ends with ...falling drops to the knees love deep, the poet's sixth haiku stanza pens a life empowered by love to color the way out from awful pitch darkness. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable read.
Odette67Penrith, Cumbria, England UKSep 12, 2014
Absolutely beautiful haiku's Liam.
diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoSep 12, 2014
Oh Liam... that is astounding.... your words, your arrangement seems to have such a flair it came alive in my mind and I saw every scene that each verse/stanza painted.... lovely.....
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While the story of love as written in this 5/7/5s smiling challenge ends with ...falling drops to the knees love deep, the poet's sixth haiku stanza pens a life empowered by love to color the way out from awful pitch darkness. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable read.
on the page Liam.....
Well done.!