the story of love [5/7/5s smiling challenge]

Cast under a spell
never under estimate
the power that is

Love it generates
inside out from one soul winks
with a heart's wings flies

Days spent together
magic through happiness gold
in the sunshine smiles

Rays dazzling the sun
enchanting true love sweetly
always you're special

This gift when received
smiles one reason to live for
painted myself in

Coloring my way
out from awful pitch darkness
a soul softly speaks

Whispering treasure
swimming inside the deepest
jewel of the sea

Blowing upon winds
loving you beautiful beams
shines a golden path

Denial is not
to choose a measure of peace
could not bare a world

Without such beauty
a blood eclipse falling drops
to the knees love deep
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2014
About this poem:
A MAD TEN MULTIPLIER THOUGHT I WOULD CHANCE SOMETHING DIFFERENT FOR A CHANGE SMILING

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Comments (19)

candykid
Mad ten multiplier! I Love it Liam......outstandingly unique proposition......hmmmm.....thumbs up
darkhorse555
its a mad idea i came up with in my head being honest christian thought i would try it out smiling thank you pal ever so much for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
gnj4u
Hi, darkhorse555,
While the story of love as written in this 5/7/5s smiling challenge ends with ...falling drops to the knees love deep, the poet's sixth haiku stanza pens a life empowered by love to color the way out from awful pitch darkness. Thanks for sharing this enjoyable read.
Odette67
Absolutely beautiful haiku's Liam. thumbs up purple heart
diana_1
Oh Liam... that is astounding.... your words, your arrangement seems to have such a flair it came alive in my mind and I saw every scene that each verse/stanza painted.... lovely.....
Mizzy4
Each one worth their place
on the page Liam.....
Well done.!


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niah9online today!
Well done darkhorse....10 pure gems.....Kteddybear
darkhorse555
joy thank you so much dear friend truly beautiful comment bless youangel grin
Girlygirl196349
Just beautiful Liam hug cheering angel
darkhorse555
chrissie truly wonderful comment dear friend heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciatedangel grin
soulgoddess
teddybear Beautifully written dear teddybear hug
darkhorse555
diana dear friend thank you so much for the wonderful comment really heartfelt beautiful deeply appreciatedangel wine
ImagineLove
WOW! Marathon of 5-7-5! This is delightful! And, our favorite subject... LOVE! cheers hug purple heart
darkhorse555
truly wonderful comment mick dear pal thank you for your kindness deeply appreciatedangel grin
paloma66
This is great Dh,10 haikus on a page so beautifully written.purple heart
darkhorse555
kathy dear friend thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
kathy dear friend thank you kindly for the wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel grin
darkhorse555
laura thank you wonderful comment appreciated deeply dear friendangel wine
darkhorse555
angeline truly beautiful comment thank you kindly heartfelt appreciatedangel hug grin
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