Cloud Castle

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In her final moments
her silent face lies before me
mother's eyes so serene
like a lake undisturbed
by turbulent winds
perhaps inside she was smiling
perhaps not
perhaps lost in a world
of dreamy thoughts..

Her eyes cast a final gaze
as she faded into the kingdom
of brilliant white light
time seemed to have slowed
as she drifted away
surrounded by sobbing...

I had always known
the final moments
would be painful for me
but to my great surprise
it was peaceful for mother
as my tears flow wide
it was where I was
by my mother's side
as she joined
God's cloud castle in the sky...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2014
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trurorob
Tough day Ken, fine tribute and picture.
Rob
trurorob
Tough day Ken, fine tribute and picture.
Rob
diana_1
beautiful... sad yes but somehow peaceful... I like this Ken and your tranquility that comes through....my thoughts are with you on this one....hug
candykid
God bless her dear soul. A wonderful tribute Ken. The image matches the words perfectly.
Spartacus2012
Thank you Rob..Cheers!

Kencheers
Spartacus2012
Thank you Shelly..

Kenwave
Girlygirl196349
Beautiful picture and poem. I'm so sorry for your loss your in my thoughts and prayers hug teddybear teddybear
Spartacus2012
Thank you brother Christian..

Kenthanks
ImagineLove
This is just so beautiful and telling on how death is peaceful, thank you K... you are a beautiful painter of word visions! hug purple heart
beautifulyou
God bless (((ken)))
A heartfelt sharing.
She knew peace!
.. 'mother's eyes so serene
like a lake undisturbed'


rose
Spartacus2012
Thank you Laura!

Kenwave
gnj4u
Hi, Spartacus2012,
...mother's eyes so serene like a lake undisturbed...it was peaceful for mother...[as she joined God's cloud castle in the sky... One could not ask for more in the final parting. In deepest sympathy for your great loss.
Spartacus2012
Thank you B.Y.!

Kenflower
Spartacus2012
Thank you Jade!

Kengift
paloma66
Más sentido pésame spar...pero se consuela en el pensamiento Que había un final pacífico tan emocionado poema.bendiciones.sad flower comfort hug peace
Spartacus2012
Thank you gnj4u!

Kenballoons
Spartacus2012
Gracias Linda Paloma por su amable visita!


Abrazo,

Kenhug
SCatlyn
Beautiful, Ken... will have to mark this for future reference.
God bless you in your life, and especially right now, as you think on your dear mother rose rose rose

Cat hug
Spartacus2012
Thank you Cat!

Kenflower
Odette67
Dear Ken,
Your verse is not humble, I know you speak from the heart. I was with you on your journey. It is my Mam's birthday tommorow, the pain of her loss never leaves me, I have cried so much today, my eyes are all swollen, even after 17yrs, I just so much need my Mam to hold me, and to tell me everything will be okay.

I'm sure your Mam was proud of her beautiful son. God bless. angel purple heart
Spartacus2012
Thank you Christina for the kind visit..I understand, it is not easy losing one's mother, the truest friend a person can ever have..God bless you as well..


Regards,

Kenwriting
Odette67
Dear Ken,
I am so with you at this sad time, nothing and no one will ever replace a Mothers love. Stay strong my dear. angel purple heart
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