In her final moments
her silent face lies before me
mother's eyes so serene
like a lake undisturbed
by turbulent winds
perhaps inside she was smiling
perhaps not
perhaps lost in a world
of dreamy thoughts..
Her eyes cast a final gaze
as she faded into the kingdom
of brilliant white light
time seemed to have slowed
as she drifted away
surrounded by sobbing...
I had always known
the final moments
would be painful for me
but to my great surprise
it was peaceful for mother
as my tears flow wide
it was where I was
by my mother's side
as she joined
God's cloud castle in the sky...
Comments (22)
Rob
Rob
Ken
Ken
Ken
A heartfelt sharing.
She knew peace!
.. 'mother's eyes so serene
like a lake undisturbed'
Ken
...mother's eyes so serene like a lake undisturbed...it was peaceful for mother...[as she joined God's cloud castle in the sky... One could not ask for more in the final parting. In deepest sympathy for your great loss.
Ken
Ken
Ken
Abrazo,
Ken
God bless you in your life, and especially right now, as you think on your dear mother
Cat
Ken
Your verse is not humble, I know you speak from the heart. I was with you on your journey. It is my Mam's birthday tommorow, the pain of her loss never leaves me, I have cried so much today, my eyes are all swollen, even after 17yrs, I just so much need my Mam to hold me, and to tell me everything will be okay.
I'm sure your Mam was proud of her beautiful son. God bless.
Regards,
Ken
I am so with you at this sad time, nothing and no one will ever replace a Mothers love. Stay strong my dear.