A star [cafe challenge]

She would be an explosion
a celestial being
sharing inside each vision
thundering from the Heaven's
shook me timbers
leaving one, all jelly at the knees

Blinding a star falls upon this earth
shivering fingers silver shimmering
each and ever word liquid
dazzling the very light beyond beauty
she who landed in front of me

The mouth falls wide open
barely able to close
words become faint smiling
upon a trail of fairy dust whispering
silently as it sprinkles
all over before impact magic

You landing with me enchanting
take me to you're paradise
as the gates slowly open
breathing in your air

That wonder in the sky
has always been love
how I saw you
Faraway princess
you're my moonlighting
dream delight
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Sep 2014

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Comments (15)

Spartacus2012
Beautifully penned Liam old pal!


Kenwriting good luck
SCatlyn
Gorgeous writing... as is your beautiful star, I would imagine.. heart wings

Cathappy place
niah9
Beautiful.....teddybear teddybear
RAVENGYPSY42
What a delicate light you shine with beauty upon your paper
She is tranquil with hues of softness
A beauty!
Blessings always
Amy ravengypsyheart beating
darkhorse555
thank you so kindly ken dear pal wonderful comment deeply appreciatedangel cheers
soulgoddess
flirty daydream rose flower

Wow! Your beautiful imagination never fails hug
Poetnumber1
Beautifully penned Liam. "Each and every word liquid dazzling the very light beyond beauty." Exquisite line.
cafetwo2010
Wow Liam! You certainly popped the cork on the wine bottle for this lovely poem.
Three cheers my friend.
Cafe
darkhorse555
thank you for the truly wonderful comment scatlyn deeply appreciatedangel grin
Mizzy4
Just catching up now Liam
from a busy week......
A fantastic piece of poetic
imagination from start
to finish.

Mick.

transport thumbs up
morgen90210
I'll say its super duper for me
darkhorse555
kathy thank you for the beautiful comment dear friend deeply appreciatedangel wine
darkhorse555
amy thank you for the heartfelt beautiful comment bless you dear friend angel hug grin
darkhorse555
thank you angeline for the truly beautiful comment heartfelt bless you pal angel hug grin
diana_1
What a stunning read! Well done!cheering
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