My darling, wolf in sheep's clothing If only I had known That a face so magnificent Housed a heart of stone
I should've noticed the venom in your kiss But I was foolishly lost in love, in all it's bliss When I finally did realize, it was already too late You already had my soul You had utter control
I remember your malicious gaze Marring your pretty face As you told me "Well, you weren't even worth the chase." And I remember my heart silently shattering into millions of shards Not once had I ever thought that this would be in my cards
I remember your words distinctly: "I was the predator and you were the prey" It plays over and over again in my head like a film reel Yet in all this hurt, I formed a heart of titanium and steel
My darling, wolf in sheep's clothing You will never see me cry The truth is, when push turned to shove, I got over you in the blink of an eye So keep claiming to be this wonderful "predator" In the end, I am still going to be The Discreditor
socrates44San Fernando, Trinidad and TobagoSep 20, 2014
Caylan
Great piece of writing! Do not let anyone put you down. The experience has only served to make you stronger: "in all this hurt, I formed a heart of titanium and steel"
Stand up for yourself. That's the way to go!
Caylan93OPJohannesburg, Gauteng South AfricaSep 20, 2014
There certainly are plenty of predators out there that would rather be right than do right. Being a good person takes effort, being a bad person only requires getting up.
ImagineLoveVenus, Montana USASep 20, 2014
Caylan this is a fantastic write, even the title is distinguished, Predator! I would like to suggest, just for your own comfort, a listen to Adele ... Set Fire to the Rain.. it just makes you feel good! Especially if your heart of titanium and steel needs a bit of a soothe! Very powerful song along the theme of your write! Jade "let it burn"!
You really got stung there Caylan......... I hope you're a better person because of it,
Very strong write ! Mick.
Caylan93OPJohannesburg, Gauteng South AfricaSep 20, 2014
Thanks, guys. Yeah, I got stung pretty bad, but you know what they say: once bitten, twice shy. I learned a very valuable lesson the hard way, but Adele and The Script got me through it. I am a better, stronger person because of that, but I can't say the same for him. In the end, I came out with scars, but they'll allow me to make better decisions next time??
Caylan93OPJohannesburg, Gauteng South AfricaSep 20, 2014
Thanks, guys. Yeah, I got stung pretty bad, but you know what they say: once bitten, twice shy. I learned a very valuable lesson the hard way, but Adele and The Script got me through it. I am a better, stronger person because of that, but I can't say the same for him. In the end, I came out with scars, but they'll allow me to make better decisions next time??
JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandSep 30, 2014
"wolf in sheep's clothing" and "heart of stone" I am familiar with. Passive aggression got the better of me. Thank God I'm free. Welcome.
Comments (12)
like the Frozen song....Let it go....
I salute to you ...glad I stop by
and took a look
Ancient Bullman
Great piece of writing!
Do not let anyone put you down.
The experience has only served to make you stronger:
"in all this hurt, I formed a heart of titanium and steel"
Stand up for yourself.
That's the way to go!
Jade "let it burn"!
Caylan.........
I hope you're a better person
because of it,
Very strong write !
Mick.
Passive aggression got the better of me.
Thank God I'm free.
Welcome.