Tumultuous

by Spartacus2012Biloxi, Mississippi, USA

Sep 2014 744 Views 10 comments

Tumultuous

Author: Spartacus2012

I toss and turn
in tumultuous waves
craving your darkest fantasies
will soon explode around me.

You are beautiful
much like demolition
painted nails that leave
unfettered wounds.

I call for you
in my slaughtered nights
searching the room
for your touch.

We have become
spontaneous perfection
I face annihilation
waiting for you.

Atomized and negated
I need you
it's You I see
all that I see.

We are
the Hiroshima
of love...

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Sep 2014

About this poem:

For Cammy..I love the times you've come...Happy Sunday!

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Comments (10)

cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USASep 28, 2014

Explosive write bro. You lit the fuse in a uniquely creative way.
Cafe

JEANIEMACLETTERKENNY, Donegal IrelandSep 28, 2014

That was some explosion.

diana_1San fernando, San Fernando Trinidad and TobagoSep 28, 2014

Oh Ken, be blessed....

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USASep 28, 2014

Thank you brother Cafe!

Ken

SnowCoveredMusefarmington, Maine USASep 28, 2014

Ken,

Perfection,
is the way
you transcribed
your true emotions here.

Impressed as always,
~SAS

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USASep 28, 2014

Thank you Mac lady!

Ken

Spartacus2012OPBiloxi, Mississippi USASep 28, 2014

Thank you Shelly!

Ken

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKSep 28, 2014

Beautiful poem - it reminds me of Adrian Monk(not a monk-lol, a widower detective) on the show Monk. His wife sometimes 'visits' him in his room... it's very touching, as are your poems.

Best to you & your son, Ken

Cat